Reviews for In All Things Balance
JOHN0713 chapter 11 . 10/29/2021
I love STARGATE and this story is very good.
libraryrockerr chapter 19 . 9/21/2021
This. Cliff.

*hugs our heroes with ALL THE HUGS IN THE WORLD*

Inv0ke chapter 13 . 9/1/2021
This makes 0 sense you didn't say how they were petrified that would have to be a very dark curse to do so and would have been picked up via the medi witch
AvidReader2425 chapter 19 . 8/21/2021
Thanks for another very enjoyable chapter
AvidReader2425 chapter 17 . 8/20/2021
AvidReader2425 chapter 13 . 8/20/2021
AvidReader2425 chapter 9 . 8/19/2021
Thanks for the great chapter
AvidReader2425 chapter 5 . 8/19/2021
Thanks for another great chapter
AvidReader2425 chapter 2 . 8/19/2021
Absolutely awesome
BBryant chapter 3 . 5/20/2021
"And if that happens, you can forget about the military contract. Hell, you can forget about your company. By the time the Senate is done with you; your company will be dissolved, your shares re-allocated, your son would end up in a foster home, and you at best would end up a carpet licking bitch to some big Bertha in a federal prison"

Gaining a monopoly isn't illegal. Hell, as long as nothing illegal is done while covering it up, doing your best to hide a monopoly from the government isn't even illegal. All that would happen is the government would split the company up and maybe force her to sell some stock. In fact, with the way she gained a monopoly, the government may not even be able to do that. Anti-trust laws only really work against companies, not individuals. It's much harder, maybe impossible, to apply those laws to someone that owns shares in many similar companies.

"Karate, Tae Kwon Do, Krav Maga, Hapkido, and fencing"

All of those are fairly useless in real combat. Most martial arts are developed by fighting people using the same martial art and are demonstrated on people who aren't actively fighting back. Practicing martial arts like the ones you listed usually just makes someone overconfident in a fight. The only good side is they can help get people in shape. There's a reason only see boxing, kickboxing, and Brazilian jiu jitsu in UFC. All fighting styles are legal and there used to be a wide variety, but the only effective style when upright is - with some kicks and elbows thrown in. Jiu jitsu is useful for grappling on the ground and takedowns. But jiu jitsu become sunless in a group. Once you're on the ground vs a group as small as 2 or 3 people, the fight is over. For that reason, kicking isn't very useful vs a group either because you can end up on the ground easily when you give up stability during a kick. Boxing is the only hand to hand combat style that works vs a group. Fencing is also a very niche skill that doesn't translate in a real fight. The swords are very thin stabbing swords, not slashing like lightsabers. And nobody has used a sword as a primary weapon for well over a hundred years, so lightsaber fighting styles are probably far superior.

Also, if you doubt me on the martial arts, just look up videos of boxers fighting martial artists in UFC or elsewhere. It's funny at first, but then it gets sad when you realize how much time these guys have spent just to get demolished by a dude with maybe 3 years of boxing training.

"there were well over two-hundred university level teams"

Make that close to one thousand. Not to mention the 16,000 high school teams, lol.
kage88 chapter 6 . 5/7/2021
kyoshi7111 chapter 12 . 5/6/2021
Good story!
correnhimself316 chapter 16 . 5/5/2021
Once again, Dumbledore is a freaking moron.
correnhimself316 chapter 10 . 5/4/2021
Holy crap, Luna actually makes sense now if she is Force Sensitive.
correnhimself316 chapter 7 . 5/4/2021
Dear God do I hate Dumbledore. He is such a manipulative old bastard.
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