Reviews for In All Things Balance
Greyjedi449t chapter 9 . 3/25/2016
looking forward to the next chapter :)
goddragonking chapter 9 . 3/25/2016
great chapter , love the way this story is going, keep up the excellent work! Keep the good writing and hope for more update soon can't wait to read more:)
Aetemus chapter 9 . 3/25/2016
Nox is willing to use Force Lightning against her own son but Dumbles is walking around in fine health instead of suffering an unfortunate accident... Riggghttt...

Then comes the so-called 'driving a wedge' between Nox and her son. I swear, if this turns out to be yet another story where the protagonist pretends to be Dumbles' man through and through, then that will be the last chapter I'll be reading.

Ginny becoming more fiesty? Really? She's more tolerable as a besotted fangirl than some miniature clone of Molly, with a matching temper and all.

The only good points in this entire chapter were Pettigrew getting boned and Narcissa sending off an early warning. Yet if the first year were to be treated as a sign of things to come, we'll soon enough see another attempt made to shove a square peg of canon into a round hole of the plotline via a set of Deus Ex Machines like custom-tailored compulsion charms...

Regarding old Dumbles, I'm amazed that neither Nox nor the DMLE head took Dumbles to task over using a supposedly priceless item or its replica as bait in a school full of children... or his apparent incompetence in letting a possessed individual teach for an entire year...

But then again, for the plot to survive, Dumbles has to live on even though a half competent Sith Lord would have disposed of him in a way that attracted no overt suspicion.
Jthomajba chapter 1 . 3/25/2016
Hoping to pair greengrass with Harry. Serious should get some Nox ass for being put up with for this long. Also think this stet is great, everything well though out. Can't wait to see the next chapter
Tellemicus Sundance chapter 2 . 3/22/2016
You know, every time I read that part of Nox training Harry while using the Senator as a lab rat reminds me of that classic scene in the ship's hold when Momma 'taught' her Baby how to kill live prey at the end of the movie "Lost World Jurassic Park"! How ironically fitting and symbolic is that? Heheheheh!
Penny is wise chapter 8 . 3/21/2016
Awesome chapter..
RavenandDragon chapter 8 . 3/21/2016
kill dumbly, I like your story, and keep up this lovely thing!
Nox is awesome! Bow to her everybody and may the force be with you!
StarfullNight chapter 8 . 3/21/2016
Wonderful story :)

Lightsaber is too OP in my opinion. Don't make them able to reflect every type of spell... Killing curse is supposed to be very complex piece of magic (soul magic)... Explosive courses should detonated on contact with blade...
Force users are too OP compared to magic users...
Force Mind arts are also too OP compared their counterparts...
Force powers like: lighting, choke, push... are supposed to be basic compared to wand capabilities...
Please introduce some real battle magic not duel magic... something that can wipe armies... You know middle age style... muggle armies and warlocks, battlemages...
Lightsabers magical, enchanted, cursed swords

Sorry about my crap english...
Mirrius Rusticulus chapter 8 . 3/20/2016
Aela? Somebody likes to play skyrim :)

Antagonists in this story are bit too weak for lightsaber-wielding-wizards, some challenge or dark cloud on horizon for them would be appreciated.
Guest chapter 8 . 3/20/2016
Kind of disappointing that Harry fell for both of Dumbledore's traps (mirror and Voldemort ) but I guess it couldn't be helped.
Blackholelord chapter 8 . 3/19/2016
Well I will state that I am enjoying the story, its well made. Personally from what I am seeing, I suggest that you split the story into two stories. The first covering the Harry Potter elements, and the second for what would be the Star Wars elements, when Harry and his mother return to the galaxy at large.
Ser Dinadan chapter 8 . 3/19/2016
I'm glad that first year went by quickly, as I'm looking forward to when the major conflicts start to pickup.
Guest chapter 8 . 3/19/2016
I'm fine with glossing over year one. Your Harry isn't as close to Ron and Hermione, so all the bonding from book one can be mostly skipped. The coming years and your own innovations I look forward to greatly.
Shalifi chapter 8 . 3/19/2016
I'm curious where things will go here. I'd be curious who will be sponsered. Colin and Denis Creevey? Some of the Slytherins? The one thing that might get Lucius or someone to cancel this is if someone in the process of investigating for the "good" of magical Britian the blood status of the various families to see who might be lying about being pure blooded or half blooded. That would be good. I'm sure people, especially Tom Riddle, would be displeased to see they're name on the list of people. Even if he supposedly doesn't care or go by the name something tells me Voldemort would be beyond angry to be slighted however it's done.
Darkness Symphony chapter 8 . 3/19/2016
A new chapter of my favourite story Best birthday present EVER
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