Reviews for In All Things Balance
frankieu chapter 2 . 2/4/2016
Nice chapter wonder if albus will save snape
Mokoloco chapter 2 . 2/4/2016
Whohoho that was nice! I'm curious how this will end, very curious...
Continue to write such great chapters i honestly can't say i didn't like it cuz i liked it very much :)
jc chapter 2 . 2/4/2016
very good work
wahyubison chapter 2 . 2/4/2016
no ginny please
Pairing Harry, Daphne, Susan, Hermione, Fleur/Su Li/Cho Chang, &Tracey
edboy4926 chapter 2 . 2/4/2016
Awesome chapter
Guest chapter 1 . 1/30/2016
Looking forward to the next chapter
Philosophize chapter 1 . 1/30/2016
This is a nice start, and I look froward to reading more. I hope that Harry ends up with Hermione as one of his partners. The way muggleborn and "creatures" are treated in the magical world can give her a lot of righteous anger that can fuel a very grey path - even a dark path, with the right circumstances.

One criticism: I don't think it's standard to use the phrase "Darth Lord." Darth is a title like Duke or even Doctor. So it's "Darth Vader, Sith Lord" or something like that.
lordamnesia chapter 1 . 1/30/2016
Well well well, this is definitely a start I can get behind! Keep up the great work, this has much promise!
Percy Jackson7 chapter 1 . 1/30/2016
Great story
thunder18 chapter 1 . 1/29/2016
Great chapter Update soon
Iceflame55 chapter 1 . 1/29/2016
You've got my attention, and I my votes for Harry pairing, are:

1st: Harem

If not Harem, then Two :).
moffles123 chapter 1 . 1/29/2016
Decent start, maybe try to do a crossover pairing instead of a hp girl for some variety, other than that looks good.
wahyubison chapter 1 . 1/29/2016
wow emperor harry (Darth Peverell when become emperor Darth Imperius)
Darth Nox as his empress lover, sister, mother, mentor, and wive
Luna and Daphne as grandmaster his new Imperial Order of Knight (Grey Jed Grey Sithi)
you can make the most elite unit Knight of The Round Table (25 Grandmaster)
Reven 6666 chapter 1 . 1/29/2016
well cheers to a good begining! i hope you update soon
edboy4926 chapter 1 . 1/29/2016
Good intro.
Looking forward to more.
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