She ACTUALLY SHOWED JAMES EMOTION other than hate and malice? ARE YOU FUCKING KIDDING ME?!

Bullshit to keep those two Russians alive you know. She should have just bombed the entire red room with those two inside of it and be done with it

Are you an idiot or did you REALLY NOT notice? ODETTE US ALREADY EMANCIPATED! YOU POSTED THAT IN A PREVIOUS CHAPTER! LEGALLY she CAN leave the manor permanently, but she stays for Harry (and quite possibly Daisy the house elf)!

You’re already a fucking lunatic for saying a four year old child being RAPED was necessary for character growth, but to put a second emancipation in a different chapter like this makes me think you more problems than what readers have already noticed…... go find a psychiatrist….. RIGHT FUCKING NOW!

I enjoyed previous chapter they were all marvelous and fascinating great work but I wonder who Odette is going to endup with I mean pair up with
Please I love the chemistry between loki and Odette love from India ️️

I thought the titles and stuff in det begining felt over the top, but I have honestly loved reading the story and I really would love too read the contiuation of the story! Give me more please :)

Nice chapter and thank you

Awesome fascinating story as well as chapters absolutely loved your efforts lots of thanks ️ from India

ahw it ends here?

I noticed an inconsistency. This chapter mentions that Odette never teceived a motherly hug but that is not entirely true. When she was a child she received many motherly hugs from Frigga on Asgard. Granted she hasn’t had them in years, but she did receive them. I love the story though but noticed that.

I have noticed a disturbing trend in fanfiction. I really like fem harry stories but of all the ones I have read; The Forgotten Potter, Mistakes and Second Chances, Taken, Blood and Soul and quite a few that I can't remember the name of currently, nearly all of them contains heavy abuse, usually rape. The only good thing about it is that it's, as far as I've seen, never graphic. (I have been reading fanfiction for about 13 years by this point.) Of the top of my head, I can think of only 3 fem harry stories that don't contain rape: Shado of the Covenant, Son of Potter Daughter of Black and the Yule Ball Panic Trilogy. I really hate this trend and whilst in a minor few, like this story, it's a major development point for fem harry, it's generally not needed and can be really off putting about that story. I do sometimes read a story involving this and can deal with it if it has a major purpose and is needed for a reason, but it is still a disturbing pattern.
Also are you planning on continuing this story? Apart from the one chapter I really don't like, the other 26 are extremely well written and whilst I don't like the abuse, if it's not rape, it's generally present and often has a purpose so it doesn't bother me. I would love to see this story continue as it is probably my second or third favourite fem harry story.
Please respond on my account. ShadowBlade359

Read the story to the end to see what in your fucked up brain could POSSIBLY justify needing rape of a 4 year child as the only acceptable plot device. Couldn't find anything.

So we have two possibilities.

1: You enjoyed writing about the rape of a 4 year and then tried to justify by saying it's "important" and "necessary" for Odette's character.

2. You somehow have never interacted with a normal human being to understand the fact that people can possess empathy towards others even without being in that situation themselves.

Either way, this story is fucking awful and dogshit. Don't understand how it has 6k favorites. Insanely unreal.

"Odette had to get raped at an extremely young and vulnerable age not just because it is important I my future chapters, but because it's a turning point for Odette and it shapes up her new personality"

You're a fucking disgusting piece of shit, not to mention fucking retarded if you think that writing about rape of a FOUR YEAR OLD girl is necessary and "important" to character development. Please pray tell, what is so necessary about raping a toddler that couldn't be achieved in some other way. Fucking sick bastard, that's what you are. Like holy shit how sick are you?

If you truly believe that this actually achieved anything but fulfilling your own sick perversions of pedophilia, then I seriously suggest you go get your brain checked. You clearly need it.

is it possible tom was played by Gellert Grindelwald and is in fact potioned or spelled to be the way he is? or is he like james and lilly, showing his true colours all along?

I think I read 3 chapters which were kinda ok and the rest I just skimmed...
Bro ticks every trope that people complain about in a HP fic and makes it even worse than normal...

Please please update this js really good