Reviews for Shatterd dreams
kazuya8 chapter 1 . 1/14/2003
Oh I like this fic! Do allow me a bit of critizism though - I think this could be a little more drawn out as far as actions and the story line goes. Other than some grammar errors cool fic I look forward to more.

~mai };-
WJTW chapter 1 . 1/14/2003

Nice story. I'm guessing this story happens at the same time as the original Oni. Is this an Alternate Universe kind of Oni story?

Anyway, I like the 'Movie Script Way Of Depicting Dialogue' method.

Would you be writing a Chapter 2? Make it quick! :)