Reviews for Locked Away
Caliberious chapter 21 . 7/5/2020
Dead ,oh noo
Caliberious chapter 22 . 7/5/2020
Part1 was wonderful i
Caliberious chapter 11 . 7/3/2020
I'm guessing the journal might turn out to be important spoke too soon I totally guessed it
Caliberious chapter 15 . 7/3/2020
Great chapter
Caliberious chapter 16 . 7/3/2020
This was a hopeful chapter , especially after the last one
Caliberious chapter 19 . 7/3/2020
This battle got me all hyped up!
Caliberious chapter 11 . 7/3/2020
I'm guessing the journal might turn out to be important spoke too soon I totally guessed it
Caliberious chapter 8 . 7/3/2020
Now who would he be working for?One of the evil team bosses?
Caliberious chapter 2 . 7/3/2020
Never read this type of story getting into Pokémon fanfic , interesting
Caliberious chapter 3 . 7/3/2020
Didn't disappoint it's good
squirtle51 chapter 68 . 7/2/2020
All I can say is wow! Once I started I couldn’t put this story down! Amazing is an understatement and I can’t wait for the last two chapters! Hopefully soon but I can understand how much time and effort must go into these. So thankful for all you do! Your stories are awesome!
Guest chapter 68 . 6/26/2020
Miavie chapter 68 . 6/10/2020
wouhaaa cette histoire est dingue ! Merci
Guest chapter 68 . 5/29/2020
It's been half a year since the last update. Hope you are doing well in this situation.
Anbludx chapter 68 . 5/17/2020
Hello N-I-N-T. My English is bad and I'm with the google translator, sorry if everything is not understood well (I read your fic translating it). I have to say that I have read your fic of the pull in just seven days. Seven days. In just seven days you have managed to stir something inside me. I do not know if for better or for worse (I am not very well animically because of the world situation ... I work in a hospital, so imagine).
But ... At first I didn't think about giving your fic a chance, but I wanted to read long stories of Ash and Misty ...
I must say you are a pretty good writer. Your story has enchanted me from the beginning, with the relationship of the protagonist couple and how Ash began to swim in the real world, with his victories and failures, I was hooked on how the original characters gave a twist on some cases and they were different, like it was a What if ...? How you develop the plot, the betrayal, the intrigue ... has hit me enormously knowing that everything Ash did, everything I fight for ... It didn't help. It made me fall. But I kept reading, waiting for everything to be resolved. He knew that since Lugia died, it was impossible to solve it and everyone was happy. But he hoped there would be a moderately happy ending, albeit with its consequences and aftermath.
The way you have portrayed the situation, the despair of Misty, the imaginary world of Ash, even though now it is different and she no longer lets him stay there completely ... I have everything imagined in my head and it is heartbreaking, since saving the distances of the existence of the pokemon, it is real as life itself, and it has hit me very hard.
Don't get me wrong, as I said above, you are very good, I loved your story, as you have known how to portray the characters and they have not been blurred throughout the chapters ... Especially Misty and Ash. As on many occasions you cannot change someone's mind ... The struggles for political power and the falsehoods behind the leaders of the different countries ... You have portrayed the real world, only with Pokemon, and you have done very well, congratulations.
I really thought it was an incredible story, with two chapters to go and, if I read correctly and understood the end of the chapter (I was touched and a little depressed when seeing the misery of Misty and Ash's new imaginary world) Ash was Wake up ... I imagine that if he manages to recover (You have always hinted that he has a recovery out of the human, to a certain extent, this being the only true power of the boy, apart from his invariable spirit, at least until recently) there is still Chances of a bittersweet ending, but with Ash and Misty having the life they deserve, together and happy (if he really does recover ... please give the poor guy a pokemon league ... or take Lance's place alongside Misty, they would be two great leaders both together).
I really hope you decide to write and finish the remaining two chapters soon. A faithful reader, although new, says goodbye and if he could see you in person, he would give you a hug and thank you. With this fic you can see the calamities of life that many times we do not want to see or pass by, that which turns your stomach, but that is there.
It is a fic that makes you think and reconsider, so again congratulations and I hope to hear from you soon.
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