It's been half a year since the last update. Hope you are doing well in this situation.

Hello N-I-N-T. My English is bad and I'm with the google translator, sorry if everything is not understood well (I read your fic translating it). I have to say that I have read your fic of the pull in just seven days. Seven days. In just seven days you have managed to stir something inside me. I do not know if for better or for worse (I am not very well animically because of the world situation ... I work in a hospital, so imagine).
But ... At first I didn't think about giving your fic a chance, but I wanted to read long stories of Ash and Misty ...
I must say you are a pretty good writer. Your story has enchanted me from the beginning, with the relationship of the protagonist couple and how Ash began to swim in the real world, with his victories and failures, I was hooked on how the original characters gave a twist on some cases and they were different, like it was a What if ...? How you develop the plot, the betrayal, the intrigue ... has hit me enormously knowing that everything Ash did, everything I fight for ... It didn't help. It made me fall. But I kept reading, waiting for everything to be resolved. He knew that since Lugia died, it was impossible to solve it and everyone was happy. But he hoped there would be a moderately happy ending, albeit with its consequences and aftermath.
The way you have portrayed the situation, the despair of Misty, the imaginary world of Ash, even though now it is different and she no longer lets him stay there completely ... I have everything imagined in my head and it is heartbreaking, since saving the distances of the existence of the pokemon, it is real as life itself, and it has hit me very hard.
Don't get me wrong, as I said above, you are very good, I loved your story, as you have known how to portray the characters and they have not been blurred throughout the chapters ... Especially Misty and Ash. As on many occasions you cannot change someone's mind ... The struggles for political power and the falsehoods behind the leaders of the different countries ... You have portrayed the real world, only with Pokemon, and you have done very well, congratulations.
I really thought it was an incredible story, with two chapters to go and, if I read correctly and understood the end of the chapter (I was touched and a little depressed when seeing the misery of Misty and Ash's new imaginary world) Ash was Wake up ... I imagine that if he manages to recover (You have always hinted that he has a recovery out of the human, to a certain extent, this being the only true power of the boy, apart from his invariable spirit, at least until recently) there is still Chances of a bittersweet ending, but with Ash and Misty having the life they deserve, together and happy (if he really does recover ... please give the poor guy a pokemon league ... or take Lance's place alongside Misty, they would be two great leaders both together).
I really hope you decide to write and finish the remaining two chapters soon. A faithful reader, although new, says goodbye and if he could see you in person, he would give you a hug and thank you. With this fic you can see the calamities of life that many times we do not want to see or pass by, that which turns your stomach, but that is there.
It is a fic that makes you think and reconsider, so again congratulations and I hope to hear from you soon.

And now I will die.

I wish to throttle you
HES BACK IN A COMA
AEURTGH
Yes I do make that noise irl, I also usually kick a wall while making it

AHHHH ASH DONT DIE
The only thing I'm sure of in this right now is, that the main characters won't die, but the others are fair game. Kinda like DC. Kill everyone but the mains. And then there's me:
"What if the main character does die? Hm?"
And that's why everyone hates me

Mewtwo tryna justify this hell is like me tryna justify why I haven't done my homework: poorly thought out (him, not NINT) and descending further and further into madness

Ooh, guess I just learner something new bout electricity
If someone asks me whether to get shocked by a battery or a plug, I know what to do!
Run the fuck away from them, they're crazy as shit

The "Not you, you stupid duck!" was perfect oh my god
WAIT IS MISTY GON DIE
SHIIIIIIIT

Lol, if there was inline commenting, your inbox would probably glitch out from me. I have a tendency to comment every so often like that. And 68 chapters of that? That would be...just...yeah.
Terrifying.

There's only seven chapters left an d

Honestly, dude, this is one of the best stories I've ever read, published or not. That might not mean much in most people's eyes, but this is a great story, and always keeps me on my toes. And ruthless...ruthless is the way to go with this part. It's the middle of a war, guns are being pointed and lives are being lost. Everyone is sleep deprived and angry, and therefore ruthless and desperate.
(Why do I relate to everyone being sleep deprived, angry, desperate and ruthless?)

Still reading after two and a half years...heh...nope, only been reading for what? A week? Oh well, it's been an emotional rollercoaster of a week, and I'm glad.

Seeing Brendan was really nice. I might not understand every part of the story, but all of the Hoenn stuff makes sense. And just one little thing~
WALLY IS THE CHAMPION!? THAT GREEN-HAIRED KID WITH THE RALTS
WHAT
I NEVER THOUGHT
Oh well, lol

Ash is so gonna want to have a quiet life after this—
Wait no, he's Ash, and he's a stupid reckless albeit brave twerp, he needs more adventure.
Maybe that's why he's so relatable.
He always needs more pokémon to see, regions to tour, battles to win. There is always another mountain to conquer, a friend to be made, an enemy to defeat. He can't be satisfied, and maybe, just maybe, is why he's lasted so long. He can't just settle down and do one thing. He aims to be a pokémon master, but even he doesn't know what that means yet. He's got to use every experience as a lesson to learn, a stepping stone to greatness. And who knows? Maybe he'll achieve his dreams. Or maybe, there is no such thing as a pokémon master. Maybe it's the unattainable invisible thing, always just out of sight. Always leading people onwards, always pumping them on so that they believe they can make it, but then they see a glimpse of it elsewhere, and suddenly they're racing down the hill again.
Or maybe, just maybe, he already is one.

YEE IRIS
I'm not even up to the Best Wishes series, but the little I've seen of her, I love
She's like Misty without all that...girliness? I don't know. Oh yeah, she probably doesn't like Ash either. I know, I know, Negaishipping, but it's pretty much the most hated ship. After anything including incest.