Not gonna lie, if someone came up to me and said they knew me from coma dreams, and gave me even a tiny bit of proof, I would probably have the same reaction as May and Max. "Okay, cool, what did I do in them? Was I awesome? Did I kill someone?" Y'know, stuff like that

Do...do Jessie and James know?
Also...I might be a dumbass but I'm 95% sure those were Team Rocket costumes. There was something else I was gonna say, but damn no inline commenting! I usually use Wattpad, and the commenting thing is getting to me. I can barely remember what I started out to do

Ah yes, 16year old dreaming about a ten year old boy. Nothing pedo about that
(Just kidding, just kidding. It's a good story, by the way. Imagine if this is how Pokémon ends though. "Aw yeah! I've been to every region and lost every league!" Ash pumped his fist in the air. Then this story happens, and suddenly Pokémon is really dark. Lol.)

Hope you are safe with the ongoing crisis and all. I know you'll finish this story.

Just finished rereading this last chapter. Please update soon! we're so close to the end!

You know, I've been reading fics for maybe 15 years now and I think this might be my favorite one. Definitely my favorite Poké fic! So please continue with your excellent quality of writing and update soon!

Stay healthy and well!

oh god, please tell me that there isnt some sort of rage virus knocking around out there

Update!

YES!

Well, that hurt.

Oh that's not good.

I havent been so enthralled in a story in years. your idea was always a favorite theory of mine and to actually get to see it fleshed out and explored with such detail is the rarest of treats. It is clear you hold great respect for the source materiel and i applaud the story in every way but one. My one critique being the vast difference in stakes between the stories told at the end. Ill admit i found myself skimming much of the dialogue.

That being said, i will happily recommend this to anyone that bothers to listen, and will myself be looking forward to more things from you in the future.

Update.

Again I find myself entranced by the near-final chapters of this story. The last couple have been the perfect roller coaster of somber, reflective, and fulfilling. It's all just so good. Bravo.

A thing I love saying about one of my current favorite anime My Hero academia is "Even if it's cliche it's cliche done right which is what makes it so enjoyable." I would say the same thing about the cliche parts of this story. Cliche doesn't always have to be bad, when done right they are among the most enjoyable moments, the reason why they are done so much that they become cliche. So all in all the story was really well done and the dramatic moments were written to be pretty intense and really enjoyable.

I revise my earlier statement the whole book is a mess and the concept really doesn't work this was a terrible idea and it just doesn't make sense either