Reviews for Locked Away
Jackal chapter 11 . 6/18/2019
I like the gyarados idea, weak defenseless fish to outright monstrous sea serpent would be a great analogy plus has a connection to Misty's gyarados fear to it becoming the strongest pokemon on her team but the togepi idea is nice as well, the link to his dream world and also the fact that togepi holds happiness within its shell (i think that's what it was or was it that it brings happiness to those who witness it hatching?) Well anyway, these were good ideas
Jackal chapter 8 . 6/17/2019
Crap he was already up to darkrai, that's basically all the legendary pokemon before sinnoh
bobbyman910 chapter 64 . 6/14/2019
I am really enjoying this story. Do you know when we will see the final chapters?
BlueJack22 chapter 30 . 5/29/2019
I'm just glad to know that you didn't cut serena
PokeObsessed chapter 64 . 5/8/2019
Please update
Waterflower Misty chapter 64 . 5/7/2019
this is such a beautiful story. please don't abandon it and continue. can't wait to read more
EmaBixx chapter 53 . 5/6/2019
Yes, and go! I'm the guy who put the thousandth comment, I'm so happy ! I am delighted that you have entered the Olympics of fic with more than a thousand comments ! It is one of the most beautiful fandom stories and certainly the most beautiful on the coma theory. You are an extraordinary writer ... A thousand comments and there is the reunion between Ash and Misty ! Coincidence ? I do not think so! They are such an extraordinary couple and you describe them so well ! I hope you update soon !Now you are among the best fic of the site, surely you will get more comments from now
EmaBixx chapter 52 . 5/6/2019
I'm still alive for luck, I'm happy! Poor Infernape
EmaBixx chapter 51 . 5/6/2019
Let's hope they're still alive ... Ash without Misty how does he do it? I like Oh, the first legendary pokemon I like ... where everyone started
EmaBixx chapter 50 . 5/6/2019
Misty can't be dead ... it would be too hard for Ash
EmaBixx chapter 49 . 5/6/2019
Kidnapped Cole, kidnapped Delia try to hit Ash in his weak points ... I like that Misty loves Cole
EmaBixx chapter 48 . 5/6/2019
poor clemont ... I liked that Misty remembered Ash's friends ... who knows what's on that cd
EmaBixx chapter 47 . 5/6/2019
Misty arguing with other members of elite four is beautiful ! Who knows what Gold has given him? I think it's good, even if it doesn't look like it! Lance in Ash's dreams has always been good possible that it is controlled in some way? Pikachu shouldn't feel guilty he helped Ash and the others survive
EmaBixx chapter 46 . 5/6/2019
Drew is a character that I personally love ... inserted now as a companion, even just for a few chapters, it makes me really happy ... am I the only one in the world who like the crak couple I like the DrewxMisty? xD Pleasure is a saying, I am a convinced Pokeshipper
EmaBixx chapter 45 . 5/6/2019
Brock's face is priceless xD I always thought of the same reaction if something like that happened in the anime
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