Reviews for Locked Away |
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![]() ![]() I like the gyarados idea, weak defenseless fish to outright monstrous sea serpent would be a great analogy plus has a connection to Misty's gyarados fear to it becoming the strongest pokemon on her team but the togepi idea is nice as well, the link to his dream world and also the fact that togepi holds happiness within its shell (i think that's what it was or was it that it brings happiness to those who witness it hatching?) Well anyway, these were good ideas |
![]() ![]() Crap he was already up to darkrai, that's basically all the legendary pokemon before sinnoh |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am really enjoying this story. Do you know when we will see the final chapters? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm just glad to know that you didn't cut serena |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is such a beautiful story. please don't abandon it and continue. can't wait to read more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes, and go! I'm the guy who put the thousandth comment, I'm so happy ! I am delighted that you have entered the Olympics of fic with more than a thousand comments ! It is one of the most beautiful fandom stories and certainly the most beautiful on the coma theory. You are an extraordinary writer ... A thousand comments and there is the reunion between Ash and Misty ! Coincidence ? I do not think so! They are such an extraordinary couple and you describe them so well ! I hope you update soon !Now you are among the best fic of the site, surely you will get more comments from now |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm still alive for luck, I'm happy! Poor Infernape |
![]() ![]() ![]() Let's hope they're still alive ... Ash without Misty how does he do it? I like Oh, the first legendary pokemon I like ... where everyone started |
![]() ![]() ![]() Misty can't be dead ... it would be too hard for Ash |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kidnapped Cole, kidnapped Delia try to hit Ash in his weak points ... I like that Misty loves Cole |
![]() ![]() ![]() poor clemont ... I liked that Misty remembered Ash's friends ... who knows what's on that cd |
![]() ![]() ![]() Misty arguing with other members of elite four is beautiful ! Who knows what Gold has given him? I think it's good, even if it doesn't look like it! Lance in Ash's dreams has always been good possible that it is controlled in some way? Pikachu shouldn't feel guilty he helped Ash and the others survive |
![]() ![]() ![]() Drew is a character that I personally love ... inserted now as a companion, even just for a few chapters, it makes me really happy ... am I the only one in the world who like the crak couple I like the DrewxMisty? xD Pleasure is a saying, I am a convinced Pokeshipper |
![]() ![]() ![]() Brock's face is priceless xD I always thought of the same reaction if something like that happened in the anime |