| Reviews for Locked Away |
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   EmaBixx chapter 10 . 4/26/2019 I like how you're doing Misty grows ... despite not being that of Ash's dreams, the character is the same and it was a good choice ! It looks like its anime counterpart |
| EmaBixx chapter 9 . 4/26/2019 the doctor is a character that I really like! I hated Sebastian and I knew he was part of the rocket team |
| EmaBixx chapter 8 . 4/26/2019 I hate so much Sebastian ... I would have choked xD I'm re-reading all your fic and I'm going to comment on all the chapters |
| EmaBixx chapter 7 . 4/26/2019 POOR ASHCULENT ASH XD |
| EmaBixx chapter 6 . 4/26/2019 a "Fucking hell" from Misty there would be all xD |
| EmaBixx chapter 5 . 4/26/2019 the misty rage is scary even in this world ... Poor Ash xD |
| EmaBixx chapter 4 . 4/26/2019 it was right that Misty would tell him ... |
| EmaBixx chapter 3 . 4/26/2019 THERE ARE MANY FIC ON THE THEORY OF COMA BUT YOURS IS ONE OF THE BEST |
| EmaBixx chapter 2 . 4/26/2019 "The death lurching scream that followed from the gym leader woke the sleeping nurse at the station." I LOVE THIS PHRASE |
| Guest chapter 35 . 4/24/2019 Didn't Daisy mention over hearing Ash and Misty talking on the phone to someone which could really only be Brock. If that's the case why wouldn't he know about Ash bring back and her bringing him? |
| Guest chapter 28 . 4/24/2019 What are Hawaiian shirts? There is no Hawaii. They are wearing floral shirts, or Island shirts. Please get a beta reader, it will help you out a ton. |
| Guest chapter 27 . 4/24/2019 Things are finally moving at a decent pace. The only thing I do not like is the way Ash has been acting to Misty. A simple call is nothing and he keeps making it out into some huge deal. It's annoying and doeskin really fit his personality. |
| Guest chapter 7 . 4/22/2019 Ugh! I hate you! It's is 1:10 AM right now and I have to be up in less than 5 hours and I can't stop reading your story! When I started I thought it was going to be something terrible because that's all I've found in this genre except for like 4 or 5 good stories. But yours is really good and there hasnt even been a y training or battles yet! I want to know the answers to all kinds of questions just like poor Ash does but I need sleep! |
| Aegiss chapter 15 . 4/21/2019 Okay, I expected Delia to have another family but with Professor Oak? I knew Gary was being a bit suspicious but Delia with Professor Oak? Since Ash is 20 in this fanfic, Delia should be around 40 years old while Professor Oak would be 65-70. And w this would mean that 7 year old Cole is the uncle of Gary, who is 20. |
| Aegiss chapter 11 . 4/21/2019 Lol you were planning on making the egg a Magikarp? That would have been kinda funny. |