Reviews for Locked Away
TheHarshApprentice chapter 70 . 4/22/2021
Regardless of what I've said before. This is great story.
TheHarshApprentice chapter 67 . 4/22/2021
Oh No! Please don't do that to Ash again.
TheHarshApprentice chapter 58 . 4/22/2021
Why is Gary's vision blurry now? Why is everyone always. Half. Dead. All. The. Time. For. No. Reason.? I suspect in earlier chapters this has occurred as well. This story is just piling stress on top of stress.
TheHarshApprentice chapter 55 . 4/22/2021
Making readers feel suffocated at every third chapter. I hate you.
TheHarshApprentice chapter 54 . 4/21/2021
I hope charizard's isn't dying and just got pokerus that turns him mega.
Astro chapter 67 . 3/26/2021
Whoa, that's a screwed-up ending.
avenger1994xtreme chapter 70 . 3/15/2021
This story was am
Prophit-AR chapter 70 . 3/14/2021
I read this story some years ago when I believe only chapter 40 something or other had just been published... The other day I had an itch to check up on this story and realized it had been finished recently! I went through and read every chapter over again with the thought running through my head “If this was a book, how long would it be?” Glad you addressed in the final comments! Definitely the best Pokémon Fic I’ve ever read and I want to say thank you for finishing this story! Your take and multiple avenues through out the story was incredible.
Look forward to more of your pieces!
CELMYAEPYEN.06 chapter 70 . 2/21/2021
Hello! How are you? I hope all is well.
I just finished the novel and I really need to express everything I felt... so here it goes:
If I had to pick an ending for the original anime, well, I would definitely pick this. I LOVE IT! Everything was so great, so real, so human... I don't know, I feel like it's one of the most amazing (Pokémon) novels I've ever read.

I loved Ash and Misty's relationship, it was just magnificent, their romance was formed little by little, a romance that felt so real... both supporting each other whenever they needed it, it was just perfect.

Ash's evolution in all this time was also spectacular, I simply applaud you! it was beautiful!

I have some doubts and I wanted to tell you about them here:
In the end what happened with Delia and her son, Leaf, Team Rocket where the did they go? I was waiting for those answers in the last chapter, but I didn't find them u.u I guess those answers will appear in the sequel, the one you mentioned in the author's note, right? I'm already looking forward to it!

I should make it clear that I don't understand much english... and you may wonder how did she read the novel if it's written in English? Well... Google translator makes miracles hahahahahaha and for that reason, I apologize if the wording of this message is not completely impeccable, but I wanted, I needed to leave you a message, because 70 chapters are not easy to write at all... and I couldn't leave without leaving a little message of support to you and that you were aware that I fell in love with your novel, completely, surely some other time, I will re-read it just for fun.

A big hug! I'll read you in the sequel, which by the way... What will be its name...? To stay tuned... I need it! And also, will it have as many chapters as this one? Again a hug and we'll read each other.
gingerxrage chapter 70 . 2/19/2021
thnk u sm for this fanfic!
gingerxrage chapter 70 . 2/19/2021
man, this bittersweet feeling I'm having right now after completing this story sucks, idk- what else is there to say but I want a sequel u can't just end this here plz, man I literally have no words for this piece of art! thank you!
brokencontroller48 chapter 70 . 2/18/2021
Yo this story is actually really really fuckin good. Though I haven’t read a lot, this is one of if not the best fanfics that I’ve read. Sure, some plot points are confusing (which will likely be resolved in the sequel), but the positives outweigh that by a landslide. I love how each of the characters are depicted in the real world (Ash is a beast, but Jessie and James grew to be my favorites despite being introduced late), the interactions between the characters, THE FIGHT SCENES, all the emotional moments, twists, turns, and callbacks, all of it just brings a smile to my face.

I can’t wait for whatever you have next because you’re talented as fuck, I wish you luck in writing and I hope you update as soon as you can!

Stay healthy
Raf
Mabelfruit chapter 3 . 2/12/2021
I swear if Delia is dead...
Guest chapter 39 . 2/9/2021
I love this fanfic so much omg
Lebrohnski chapter 70 . 1/27/2021
Thank you for completing this great story, I had such a fun time reading it. In my opinion this is the gold standard of pokeshipping stories, and I cannot wait to read the sequel. Also, one of my favorite moments (as there were quite a few) was Iris kicking the Kanto elite fours butt.
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