Reviews for Locked Away
goldengladia chapter 58 . 6/17/2018
YES! I thought I was gonna have to violently beat you until you decided to update!
Drahjan chapter 58 . 6/17/2018
At least you posted (unlike me and have had writer's block for nearly a full year now). And boy, was this a good chapter. I loved that you inserted these two crazy grunts. I nearly laughed when you revealed who they were. Great job, and I can't wait for more!
Tobias Morrow chapter 58 . 6/17/2018
Welcome back! So glad to see that you are continuing this story!
lewovo chapter 38 . 4/22/2018
jessie and james! and maybe meow?
lewovo chapter 33 . 4/22/2018
oh Ash... your hair is so orange is the best thing you can come up with? hahaha
Love Greninja!
lewovo chapter 31 . 4/22/2018
aww May and Max came to join the party!
lewovo chapter 23 . 4/21/2018
oh good to see that pikachu is alive and well in this version. i mean if pikachu have a such a short lifespan, then ash/red in all different worlds certainly would have a tough time to cope with everything. especially since red in the game actually did age to an adult.
lewovo chapter 22 . 4/21/2018
amazing story! best pokemon story I have read so far!
Bad Anon chapter 23 . 3/26/2018
Aw, emotional development.

Nice to see Ash maturing and growing and reconnecting with his Pkmn. Character development is always heartening to read.
Bad Anon chapter 7 . 3/25/2018
Emotional feelings and determination salads, that is vary good.

Vary, vary good.
Bad Anon chapter 4 . 3/25/2018
Emotional and determination packed. Vary good.
Bad Anon chapter 3 . 3/25/2018
More feels. The kind that gives an otherwise healthy person heartburn.

You know, the good feels of confusion.
Bad Anon chapter 2 . 3/25/2018
Ha. Haha. Haha haha hahahaha!

Let the feels flow through you!
Bad Anon chapter 1 . 3/25/2018
Ooh. The feels are strong with this one. Looks super promising.
Foxypaws3 chapter 57 . 3/20/2018
Hwaugh! I love this story and it looks like you haven't updated in six months! I'm so invested now, I wanna know what happens and when we'll get that happy ending from his dreams! I have so many inklings of what could possibly happen, and I can't keep myself contained. Don't let this be an abandoned fic, it's ingenious and daring and amazing! Kudos to you and may the writer's block crumble in the face of such a potentially epic conclusion!
1,276 | « Prev Page 1 .. 22 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 42 .. Last Next »