Reviews for Locked Away |
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![]() ![]() ![]() YES! I thought I was gonna have to violently beat you until you decided to update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() At least you posted (unlike me and have had writer's block for nearly a full year now). And boy, was this a good chapter. I loved that you inserted these two crazy grunts. I nearly laughed when you revealed who they were. Great job, and I can't wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Welcome back! So glad to see that you are continuing this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() jessie and james! and maybe meow? |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh Ash... your hair is so orange is the best thing you can come up with? hahaha Love Greninja! |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww May and Max came to join the party! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh good to see that pikachu is alive and well in this version. i mean if pikachu have a such a short lifespan, then ash/red in all different worlds certainly would have a tough time to cope with everything. especially since red in the game actually did age to an adult. |
![]() ![]() ![]() amazing story! best pokemon story I have read so far! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, emotional development. Nice to see Ash maturing and growing and reconnecting with his Pkmn. Character development is always heartening to read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Emotional feelings and determination salads, that is vary good. Vary, vary good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Emotional and determination packed. Vary good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() More feels. The kind that gives an otherwise healthy person heartburn. You know, the good feels of confusion. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ha. Haha. Haha haha hahahaha! Let the feels flow through you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh. The feels are strong with this one. Looks super promising. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hwaugh! I love this story and it looks like you haven't updated in six months! I'm so invested now, I wanna know what happens and when we'll get that happy ending from his dreams! I have so many inklings of what could possibly happen, and I can't keep myself contained. Don't let this be an abandoned fic, it's ingenious and daring and amazing! Kudos to you and may the writer's block crumble in the face of such a potentially epic conclusion! |