Reviews for Locked Away |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! Ho-oh is one of my favorites. One of these days, I'm just going to list out legendary Pokemon based on importance and how they are essential. Like Lugia and Ho-oh are essential but the regi trio technically are not. But regigags might be. So here's to hoping for healing all around |
![]() ![]() ![]() Devon corp is the competitor of Silph. Them and Macro Cosmos would be the competitors, lol. Aether would be closer to world wildlife fund or animal rehabilitation center etc. Just dork lore and nitpicks Also, I'm pretty sure Mewtwo also has been erased from his mind two but that was purposely since the movies happened making me worry about Giratina too. The creation trio are all dragons this is bad. But ho-ho being taken is worse. He can create life. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I refuse to believe wartortle is dead. Ash was a statue and was brought back. Wait! Is that how they contained iris and cilan?! Wartortle was taken... Bill is mialove bill he is underused as a professor, even worse for what he did for the world). And apparently, red not only exist but was taken too. You can't hold humans hostage. We get out. With our tenacity and determination, we escape despite the odds. basically its easier to treat them like hans solo freeze them. That way, they don't need food or accommodations. They can't do that to the dragons because they need to implant the control chips . |
![]() ![]() ![]() The dragons yay! Also I'm surprised their not holding larivtar and it's line those things would be as huge as full grown charizard if not bigger! It's based of Godzilla! Also get the legends out though now I wonder about victini! |
![]() ![]() ![]() But James has his inheritance? The dude didn't collect?! Like his parents should have been died of natural causes by now! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Claps hard. You only remember someone like that if you are a loner, and they were the first friend. |
![]() ![]() ![]() if ash can survive being turned to stone so can wartortle. and look at Mewtwo! Mindwipe on the point out here. |
![]() ![]() ![]() if asked they are dragons. the devs just refused to add more dragons that early because it would've been op at the time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Here's to hoping they find Delia in a bottle. And not dead. I speak as a mom. those who love their kids as deeply to keep them on life support for 10 years? Wouldn't pull the plug without planning to go with them as dark as it sounds. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm wondering if you are possibly going to use the game logic of ash’s consciousness transporting into a parallel universe where time stands still. The thing is in alola, they made parallel universes a thing that can exist. That or really is an aura guardian. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() god, to say that I cried while reading this chapter would be an understatement! loved it ! |
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![]() ![]() Personally I would have loved to see a Scene of Ash and all of his Pokémon just kinda hanging out. So we could see there thoughts on well everything. But also to show that ash will always have his family with him anywhere he goes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is the most incredible piece of literature that I've ever come across on this site. And in my top 5 reading list overall (sorry, Terry Brooks). Amazing and brilliant. You are a very talented writer and story teller and I am so grateful you chose to share this story with all of us. |