Reviews for Echoes |
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![]() ![]() Not gonna read cause premise has a flaw... why care IF YOU ARE GOING TO BE MURDERED? oh yeah nevermind let me die. I dont care lol fanfic writer stupid logic nevermind |
![]() ![]() Heyaaa just wanted to let you see that someone appreciates your work in april 2025 :) No honestly i found it through an old reddit post and it has kept me from studying in the last 2 days It is honestly amazing and wholly clarifying, i just root with Victoria sooo much Honestly Love LOVE it I hope you are doing well! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I completely forgot about this until I was checking my FFN lists and saw it had updated recently. It all came flooding back as I reread. It's messy, and it definitely carries that vibe of something written when you were younger that you're trying to wrangle into order now, but I like that messiness of it. Victoria's writing isn't always the most clear or consistent, but I like her single minded need to avenge Cedric. That was the bit that came back to me as I started the reread. "Isnt this the one where she's like "I'm gonna fuck Voldemort's shit up for taking Cedric"? Everyone wants to kill him off in their fics, but I don't think I've ever seen someone truly want to avenge him. I'm prob gonna switch over to the AO3 version just because it's easier to coordinate. But like, I don't blame you wanting to switch. The comments on this one were unbelievably mean and I'm not sure why. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I re-read this after a very long time, as I finally figured out my password for this site. Very nostalgic. It truly is incredibly written, and this is like one of my favourite stories in the hp fandom. The pacing, the characterisation of someone being reborn after an incredibly traumatic event, missing their old life as everything felt "better" back then even if maybe it wasn't. It seriously is amazing. I quite enjoyed the chapter explaining more about Victorias mother, I'm curious how you will spin it further, among ither things ;) Thank you for writing this story! |
![]() ![]() Emo and easily bullied? A push over. Plus her mental condition? She’s basically asking to be saved by a prince charming. She doesn’t care for anything, even her life and let people freely bother her. What an incredibly dreadful read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ironically, that winter invite is probably incredibly ominous to Victoria. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great so far! And screw those other reviewers. I find the HP fandom is a bit crazy especially on here. AO3 is better about giving you control over reviews and stuff. But this story is great and I get it if you want to move over there. Ppl on here are more childish and bullheaded every day and it’s a shame. Used to be better but oh well. Can’t wait to see how things go later on with Victoria and Umbridge and the insanity that will happen with Voldy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Glad Victoria is finding some purpose in life. She seemed so adrift in her life that this is exactly what she needed. Hopefully WWW will keep her busy after the war |
![]() ![]() ![]() Happy to see this update again. I’m really excited to see what is going to happen with the Diggorys! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ohh is this drama coming Cedric must have written about Victoria to his parents |
![]() ![]() ![]() Now I’m curious what will happen to the locket |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fuxking hate voldy but they did a good job of making people hate Umbridge more. Jeezus. Great characterization! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Forgot tl review once again. I have read this fic twice already and the tragedy of Cedric is still heartbreaking. Also, her depression is too real. Amazing job. Also, dayum - i had not read this chapter last time lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the take of grief done here Not man SI really delve into the I died and lost everything angle The trick ending where digger lives as proof she can do nothing and live in the background before being crushed presumably because the 11 year old couldn't set things up to stop the magic Nazis reviving magic Hitler by murdering a 15 year old and 13 year old boys is a nice touch The relationship with their new parents would be weird though the death eater death seems weird to happen Sad to see no potential repair of that mother/daughter relationship but ah well Why would they go after her? She like had 2 interactions with purebloods both time being malfoys maybe I misread some things Interested in how she develops further |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sorry about the pm and whatnot I hope this message finds you well, the pacing is nice, I mean it all gearing to the climax relax I enjoy your work happy new month and thanks for the update . |