damn great story cant wait for next chapter

hope this get updated, the story is pretty good

It's been a few years since we've seen an update from you, I hope you're doing alright Myareska

years since updated, much sad

sword

I like how this fanfic has a sense of melancholy in the atmosphere

What that actual fuck dude you didn't finish the fic

six moves? well, it's technically four moves, but if you mean six moves later as in six moves in total after the first, that would sound as if he fell for a scholar's mate, which would be... a rather amateur blunder.

It’s a shame you’ve quit writing, I enjoyed this story.

I just started reading this story last night and I am already caught up. I absolutely must say I love it so much. Your writing style is simply amazing and while I generally love all kinds of Romantic stories your style here of putting them in such pain just speaks to me on a spiritual level. I know it may be a long shot at this point but to see how Weiss decides to ask Jaune to the Dance or if she can even go through with it just is something I can not wait to see.

Well, hello there again Neo.

Ozpin's disappearing act is caught between being bemusing and vaguely disturbing. How does he do it?

good story, hope you’re doing well and able to continue this!

oh my god this got an update! my favorite Rwby fic got an update! thank you universe!

Just finished reading this fic. It's really well written! I love the way you gets us both the heads of Jaune and Weiss to see what they're thinking and struggling with as their relationship evolves. I see it's been nearly 3 years since the last update. So whether or not you ever finish this, I just wanted to say thank you! It's really good and I'm glad I got to read your work.