Reviews for Eternal Blue Memories
Darklink1011 chapter 10 . 4/12/2009
I hope you can start writing this fiction again someday it is very good
Mr. Honeysuckle chapter 10 . 12/15/2007
Sw, Lunarian! I think the only disappointment is that you stopped working on this. Please don't give up on this story. I love this story because it plays to exactly my own and only problem with the game. I too have a soft spot for Ruby in my heart. I love your description of her in humanoid form. Also, your depiction of Hiro is brilliant. You keep him in character while developing him in perhaps a manner whose realism cannot be surpassed in any other story about the game. In short, this story is brilliantly told, and your writing has improved drastically. On the other hand, I also love that you portray Ruby as naive and reactionary. It would, for a lesser writer like me, be tempting to portray Ruby as flawless, and you have done nothing of the kind. If I write a Lunar SC or EBC sotry, as I someday wish to, could I have the honor of having you review my story? Hope you're still out there somewhere. My addie is singingbutterfly cox . net. Bryan McGucken
Ragamander chapter 10 . 11/23/2007
You're definitely a talented writer; I'll give you that. You really hit on some good points with this fanfic. On top of that, I feel you do a good job of keeping the characters intact. It is sad that this hasn't been updated in 2 years. It brings back a lot of happy memories of playing LUNAR 2, and I'd like to get some closure to this story.

Regarding criticism, I agree that references to the video-game mechanics should be omitted. They make no sense outside an actual game. Additionally, you might want to check chapter five for times when you mistakenly call the Blue Star the "Silver Star".
Atomicflare chapter 10 . 2/23/2006
Well I have to say you did an amazing job I am totaly intrested in reading how the rest of the story will turn out. This game was one of my favorites, and i like how your fanfic is going. Just so you get an idea after reading your first chapter I printed out all of your chapters and I read them on my way to work for a week (1 chapter a day) and i have to say that yours is one of the better fanfics i have read. I can't wait till you make another. The only suggestion I can make is at the very end of this chapter you put her skill lvl to 25, well its nice that you give the readers an idea but you made the reference to it as a game, yet how can the characters in the story realy know what a lvl is? So instead of saying "skill lvl 25" you can say "she can easly solo the monsters outside of Melbera" that might be a better way to discribe skill. But all in all you have done a great job I can't wait till you continue. Keep up the good work.
kagome355 chapter 10 . 12/10/2005
Very good story so far, and it doesn't start out with Hiro rediculously in love with Ruby like most do with their romances (not necessarily them, but others). It's interesting so far, but I would also recommend having her learn some earth abilities too, there were too few of those in the game...so it makes sense that someone is innate fire and earth. This also makes sense as no other dragon has the power of Earth.
Some Random Reviewer chapter 10 . 12/3/2005
This is actually a pretty good story. I'd like to see Hiro's expression at Ruby's new form.

Please don't go on hiatus, I want to see this story end.
GeneralDragon chapter 10 . 12/2/2005
Wonderful chapter, although i've always been deadset on LuciaxHiro and NallxRubby I hope it works out that way in the end. Don't get discouraged if you don't get reviews, getting them in the Lunar section is few and far between, trust me I know. If you need any one to beta for you drop me an e-mail its posted in my profile. Keep up the good work, and i'll keep on reading.
Luna Chic799 chapter 10 . 10/24/2005
Don't stop writing! I'm sorry, I have been so busy with school that I haven't had time to come and read! It's really nice, and I like this chapter. Kinda like a plot builder, yes? And for some constructive critism... Try not to use sayings from the game such as "MP". In the real world of Lunar, they would just say "magic". Also, saying that she has a skill level of 25. Just say she is moderately skilled now, or something to that effect. One last thing, when someone has dialogue, don't put "hehehe" in the quotes. Just add "Ruby giggled" or "Ruby laughed nervously". Something to that effect. Well, nice job on the story! PLEASE continue the story! It seems like everyone is on a hiatus lately! :( Can't wait to read more!
Luna Chic799 chapter 9 . 10/24/2005
Oh, I like the way you are setting this up. You did well describing how they are both falling out of love; it's quite realistic. Most people would've just made it blunt, so I like how you have made it a gradual thing. However, like I said before, try not to put author's notes in the middle of the story. It's unprofessional. Anyhow, excellent chapter! I'm going to read the second one now! -
xXx Tinkies xXx chapter 10 . 10/13/2005
DON'T GIVE UP WRITING THIS STORY! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT! FOR THE LOVE OF THE GODDESS, YOU MUST CONTINUE! I read & review whenever I can, so PLEASE don't end it! I NEED to read MORE so I can find out what happens & stuff! So keep up the EXCELLENT AWESOMENESS & PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE A.S.A.P.! _
xXx Tinkies xXx chapter 8 . 9/22/2005
OMG! I can't believe I missed reading this chapter... until now! Anyway, GREAT FRICKIN' CHAPTER! I'm glad you're still continuing on with this story! ...I hope Nall's ok, LoL! Anyway, keep up the excellent AWESOMENESS & PLEASE CONTINUE A.S.A.P.! I MUST READ MORE IMMEDIATELY! _
Luna Chic799 chapter 8 . 9/13/2005
Yey! Another chapter! I really liked this one. Good job on keeping out the repetitiveness. I like how you wrote about Ruby being drawn to the katana. You had a few spelling errors, but you can fix that with spell checker no problem. One more thing, try not to put author's notes in the middle of the story. (i.e. Telling us you got that line from Lunatic Parade.) Wait until the end of the chapter to inform us. Anyway, I loved this chapter, and I love that insult about the gorilla cookies, too! I sometimes tell that to my friends jokingly. hehe I love Lunatic Parade. Anyhow, keep on writing! I can't wait to see your next chapter! :D
Luna Chic799 chapter 7 . 4/29/2005
Hey, hey! Long time, no read! This was an excellent new chapter. Sorry that I didn't review sooner. I haven't been on as much as I use to visit. Anyhow, I really liKe the development of the plot and characters. For a bit of constuctive critism, a few of your lines were a bit repetitive. For example: 'Figuring that sounded like a great idea she told him, "Thanks Nall. That's a great idea."' There is really no need to state that Ruby thought it was a great idea twice. You should probably have just went with Ruby's dialogue & left out the "Figuring that sounded liKe a great idea" part. Anyway, I really did liKe this installment of the story & I can't wait to read that next chapter! Until next time, Keep writing & see you later!
xXx Tinkies xXx chapter 7 . 4/23/2005
WOO-HOO! Ya finally updated! Anyway, GREAT chapter! I can't WAIT to read what happens next so keep up the AWESOMENESS & PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE A.S.A.P.! _
Luna Chic799 chapter 6 . 11/20/2004
LOL! I like this chapter, what with the Ruby being naked scene. I found it to be quite humorous! _ hehehe I can't wait to see what happens next! UPDATE SOON! _;;
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