Reviews for Purebloods and Their Tedious Traditions |
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![]() ![]() The whole losing her virginity right after the meeting was so unbelievably icky and unnecessary. What possible purpose did it serve? Do you have a thing for your women cheating on you? I'm guessing you must have, what with Ginny doing it too and Harry not even being that bothered by it either time. It really makes for a pathetic main character that most would not really want to read about. The only purpose the infidelity served was chasing readers away. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can I just say, listening to this on a screen reader is a freaking adventure. Well done short fic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story |
![]() ![]() O_O |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome work |
![]() ![]() ![]() I still wondering if Harry and Daphne have a kid and he or she goes to Hogwarts I thinking the Sorting hat would ask Gryiffdor or Slytherin. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice story, good portion of lemons. I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() really hot story |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm kind of sad this is complete, I would definitely have read more! Fingers crossed you end up inspired to :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was an amazing story. I rather enjoyed it, even with all the smut. You are also a fairly good writer. I believe I only saw one mistake, that being a name mistake (Tracy's name is Davis, not Davies). I am saddened that you have such short Harry Potter stories. I believe that your stories could become rather popular if they were longer. Combine your good writing skills with being bumped up on the HP list every time it was updated, and it could see lots of popularity. Not to mention that I would like to see those two ideas come to life. The Obsolete Weapon? The Apex Predator? You were intending those to be longer, right? I didn't see you have anything about them being 1-5 shots, so I can only assume. Good luck! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww they're cute together |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interested to see how this goes! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I get the feeling Daphne wanted have trouble walking in the morning |
![]() ![]() ![]() So, the story of whores. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice! I like the short story. |