Reviews for Purebloods and Their Tedious Traditions |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Well that was certainly an enjoyable ending. Nice to see Ginny get her jut desserts. Good luck on your future endeavors! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story and a fantastic chapter. Ginny doesn't really surprise me at all. As the first Weasley born girl in generations I expected her to be spoiled absolutely rotten by her immediate and extended family. Ron did once say a Weasley family gathering is an ocean of redheads, you just have to wonder where the rest of them are as I doubt only Arthur has Hogwarts age children during Harry's years. Ah well, another JK plot hole. The scenes with Harry, Daphne and Narcissa were great. While Daphne said it would not be a regular occurrence, that doesn't completely rule out future sessions. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for writing! I enjoyed the last chapter. The wedding scene was well done, and it really tied together the story. The smut was of course great. I look forward to reading whatever you put out next, Fairy Tail, HP, or otherwise. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome ending to an awesome story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Enjoyed the story, well done. Can't wait to see what's next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() great work great fic can't wait to see what they do together now |
![]() ![]() ![]() We've got the smut, now let's expand into plot. Throw some problems in that will get them worked into a frenzy of sex for release. Hmm, maybe an old girlfriend of Daphne's can make an appearance? |
![]() ![]() ![]() love this tory cant wait for new chapters |
![]() ![]() ![]() really good |
![]() ![]() Update your next story quick |
![]() ![]() ![]() An excellent chapter thanks for posting it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() great chapter looking forward to more |
![]() ![]() A huge improvement to the writing style IMO. Daphne still feels super flat as a character unfortunately, you should have given them some kind of small backstory at Hogwarts or defined what she's actually done with her time post Hogwarts, or something I think. It would go a long way to making her seem less of a blank cut-out and more of a real character. |
![]() ![]() This chapter is pretty good. Though I think having Harry and Daphne confessing their love at the end of the chapter is pretty cheesy with how soon you had them say that. |
![]() ![]() Nice potential story I guess but I don't think Harry would ever sleep with Narcissa Malfoy for a multitude of reasons. Maybe if you had someone else in Narcisssa's position instead like Pansy Parkinson, Tracey Davis, or even an OC that Harry met. |