Reviews for Purebloods and Their Tedious Traditions |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Very good chapter. Thanks for update |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hot and well written as usual! I didn't mind the pacing for Harry/Daphne's relationship, it still managed to feel natural. You did in 8k and got it right where many can write 100k and it be a total mess. Loved the quick update as well. Looking forward to the next installment! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Enjoyable work as usual. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good start and hopefull Harry and Narcissa continue their relationship through this fic. |
![]() ![]() Interesting start. I hope you ate going to continue this. It seems it wouldn't be a smut story only. But if it is going to be one it isn't that bad. I am able to live with it and i will read it whatever it will be. I doesn't look like you that harry only have sex with two women but surprise me and show how good it will be. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hope you continue with this and update soon, can't wait to read the next chapter :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting start and I would enjoy seeing more of this. Red |
![]() ![]() ![]() The whole 'must be husband/father' in order to hold a Geezergamot seat makes absolutely no sense, since Dumbledore not only held a seat, but was the head geezer, and he was not only an unmarried non-father, but batting for the home team |
![]() ![]() ![]() I did enjoy the chapter a lot. The conversation was engrossing, the way you set up the plot was nicely done, and the smut was great. I look forward to seeing more. Thanks for writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good lemon and good first chapter. |
![]() ![]() PUBLIC AND CHAPTERS LONGER, PLEASE. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice. Thanks for sharing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Glad you're still writing. This chapter felt a little off though, not sure if it was the abrupt start and end to the lemon. I know their relationship is meant to be pretty much FWB, but it didn't feel like they were lusty or anything, just kind of flat as if you just went through the motions of it. I think that you might rely too much on the characters tone in dialogue to convey emotion, instead of also using thoughts and actions. I'm not a writer though so I could be totally wrong. Looking forward to the chapter with Daphne. It's going to be interesting to see how you plan to advance their relationship quickly and how you choose to depict her (I'm guessing Harry won't be OK with her fucking other men like Narcissa). |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good start, always like Harry/narcissa and i hope Daphne will be cunning as well secretly hoping narcissa still gets pregnant haha |
![]() ![]() A good chapter |