Reviews for Loss of Innocence
Guest chapter 1 . 6/22/2023
How cute bra and vegeta have a nice relationship
Bra is very cute and much cuter than bulma IMO
Really nice story
bardalicious chapter 1 . 12/2/2004
Good
Sailor Kawaii chapter 1 . 3/15/2002
Good story but I don't think Vegeta would sing a boy band song.
deepcoiler chapter 1 . 2/26/2002
When people insult you it does hurt.

Every day of my life people would insult me

for being diffrent.

Even teachers.

Just because I was different
Bittersweet Symphony chapter 1 . 7/3/2001
words do hurt! i was teased so much in 5th and 6th grade, i almost went suicidal. but in 7th grade, i stood up for myself. this was a really a touching fic. tears are in my eyes. thanks for writing such a good fic
Yamcha'sBabyDoll chapter 1 . 6/30/2001
That was so sweet! It's nice to see that not only does Vegeta care about his daughter, but that he listens to good music!
Natalie chapter 1 . 4/22/2001
*Sniff* that's beautiful. No, I'm serious, it's really beautiful. And so true. I also love fics where they show Vegeta's soft side. Great work!.
Litha M chapter 1 . 3/30/2001
Wow, that was beautiful. Name calling is so cruel, I can't blame Bra for feeling the way she did. Bravo, this story was heart-warming and realistic (well, as realistic as Super Saiyins and gravity machines can be, but you know what I mean).
KayuraK chapter 1 . 3/14/2001
Great Story, but the thought of Vegeta singing Savage Garden makes my head 's almost aas bad as Elmer Fudd singing Arms Wide Open by Creed.

But I loved it.
Cher the writer chapter 1 . 3/12/2001
that was just tooooo goood
Sky Blue Angel chapter 1 . 2/12/2001
This story is so true. I learned the hard way that words do hurt. Keep writing stories.
Songbreeze and WiccaGurl chapter 1 . 12/23/2000
You know what? You're right that saying is bullsit. I have gone through some of the samethings and words do hurt. They may be easy to stay, but their hard to hear. This is a beautifully written story. Please continue writing. Oh, remember that some people say things because they aren't happy with themselves. So what they say may not be a reflection of who you are, but of who they are.
Lexly chapter 1 . 12/9/2000
That was a cute fic. And I liked the message. Great job. And later! _~
Self-Proclaimed Grunge Queen chapter 1 . 12/8/2000
I feel the same way...

name calling is horrible...

look what it does to the victims...

(((
Darmis chapter 1 . 12/2/2000
Well david's wish. I liked your story. Alot. It hit home.
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