So far this has been a good fanfic just hope that you get around to writing more chapters and not abandon the story.

Honestly, just post the lemons/story on AO3 and you don't have to worry about your story being taken down or getting in trouble. I vote for all the lemons, especially with our Jashin and Ophis.

I would have been cool with Koharu being a pairing if you hadn't had Jashin lie to her and force her to become a slave/servant. That was honestly messed up. Naruto should have stepped in at that point .-.

Aren't the angels good guys, why would they want to 'deal' with them? Wouldn't they be more helpful to Naruto, not problematic?

Wait, so isn't she evil? Also, Kaguya is a bad mother, to all three of her children actually. At least two of the Ootsukis out of four turned out decent people. I hope Jashin can learn to be a good person, with Naruto's guidance. She is definitely cute though, I'll give her that.

It is a bit late but I vote for lolis. They are superior in every way :3

Good story

I have loved reading this story and i hope that you are able to continue it

ughhh fuck me this is bad just bad
sure has some potential but right now its just bad

you seem to pay no attention to details. Firstly, you described Zaku, Kin's teammate as a corpse from Naruto's attack in the forest. How the fuck could her team still pass?

Secondly, Akado is on Kabuto's team, which LEFT before prelims, so how the fuck is he still competing?

Thirdly, Konoha is so fucking incompetent they don't even notice at least one entire team being added between the 1st 2 rounds? There was ONE Oto team. But suddenly in the prelims there are 2 and they just shrug and assume they overlooked them or something?

return them and please keep continuing this fic its so good

i see. i don't have problems with lemon parts.

I vote yes to return them I mean this is fanfiction for a reason. I mean I have seen fics where Naruto goes complete dark and destroys Konoha so lemons shouldn't be an issue lol

All that flirting with Ino? What happen to that? Thought she might be join the harem.

Keep the lemons