Reviews for Can't Rely on Authority
jimmy.oz chapter 42 . 12/28/2020
Pretty good story glad to have read it so I will check to see if you have others that I might read.
Guest chapter 40 . 12/14/2020
I hope harry leaves hogwarts behind and goes to school abroad for the rest of his schooling as, let's face it, hogwarts provides a very poor education.
Guest chapter 10 . 12/13/2020
I'm always surprised that the kids - or even Mr Weasley - don't ask winky to come with them, or even offer to bond (a) to give her a place to stay and (b) save her life. After all its expensive to buy an elf and, in some stories they're usually bonded to ancient families so you wouldn't be able to buy elves generally.
kelwin chapter 1 . 11/14/2020
waw good fic i like it.
Matt chapter 25 . 11/3/2020
What is your deal with 'necklace'? It's not a difficult word. And it's not "neck less". There are word processors available free with built-in spell checking.
Matt chapter 24 . 11/3/2020
"she and Harry met up"
Why? Why didn't they meet down, or sideways, or diagonally? Meeting doesn't require a direction; people either meet or they don't. The sentence should read 'she and Harry met'.
Matt chapter 7 . 11/3/2020
What the #& %$ is a piosioness boa constrictor? Did they teach spelling in your school? If that was supposed to be 'poisonous', I hate to burst your bubble, but boa constrictors don't have poison! The whole point of a boa constrictor is that they squeeze their prey to death, so they don't need poison. Poison in snakes and insects is a) protection and b) a way to incapacitate their prey. Boas don't need it, having incredibly strong muscles instead.
Guest chapter 2 . 11/2/2020
This story had a promising start, however, it seems to be going down the drain quickly, employing several cliches. For example, what is the point of making Harry a damn billionaire? What value does that bring to the story? That tacky trunk affair is also pretty stupid in my book, it's just lazy writing, instead of writing something original or finding a different solution, boom! Apartment and training grounds in a trunk. It's boring! The grammar needs some work as well.
Fire Tempest chapter 42 . 10/22/2020
This has been a great story. Thank you.
gabzep chapter 42 . 10/11/2020
Want a great story! Iv read a lot where the goblins help out Harry but I always enjoy reading everyone’s different ways of going about it.
WinterTigerEclipse chapter 4 . 9/20/2020
Now I think about it the charathers in both the book and the movies were very lucky no one came up with the twisted idea to have volemort to possessed his familiar or worst yet the basilisk can you imagine the horror of that or even him trying to make the basilisk into a soul container guess it's a good thing they lack logic and not very bright to think out side of the box if the book series or even the movies themselves are ever remade into an animated series would give them endless possibilities what is possible in movies are limited to thier imagination each story of fanfiction is like a separate alternative dimension into that world that took on a life of its own
KIMMIKY chapter 2 . 9/8/2020
Hmm just a thought. An unknown 14 year old suddenly opens a bank account with a start up amount to the tune of one million pounds out of nowhere, without it being a trust account and with full access and neither the bank officials nor the government questions this? Hmm maybe it's just me but seems a tad farfetched to think they wouldn't be the least bit suspicious. My first thought was a rather stupid criminal, using an alias they haven't thought through properly. But hey I don't work in finance so perhaps this happens all the time?! Lol
stevem1 chapter 2 . 9/7/2020
With just under 15 million galleons, Harry is not a billionaire or trillionaire. At the canon exchange rate of 5 to 1, he has about 45 million pounds and is a very wealthy young man. But he’s not oil sheik wealthy.
Spazzman29 chapter 35 . 8/27/2020
Tonks and Remus is the second worst canon pairing behind Bill and Fleur. Its a shame you are using it.
Superior Rights chapter 32 . 8/21/2020
bro idk if i’m the only one thinking this but they just caused fraud. how r u going to steal someone’s money because u don’t like them and give it away and justify ur actions as saying it’s a prank. that’s a crime no matter how u look at it
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