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"This co-insides"
It's coincides.
This folks us what a California education gets you. Nothing.

You spelled necklace as neckless? Lmao...you are a fucking idiot!

Accept...it's not except, or axcept...it's ACCEPT. Jesus fucking Christ it's a two syllable word.

Epically? Is that even a word?

Harry paying the Dursleys not to abuse him made me sick to my stomach. Literally.

Pants is underwear in England.

And even more jewelry from the goblins. Dude you took the jewelry thing way over the top.

The Borgin shopping trip was a bit ridiculous. Just how much jewelry is Harry going to wear? He be going around like a pimp daddy.

"Wow that's convent".
Convenient have too many letters for you ?"

I don't know that I want to read a story where the writer can't even spell the wizarding world's spells correctly. I'm talking about the PATRONUS spell.

Great story, kept me entertained for a couple of days. The detail is very vivid, almost like a video in your mind.

Of all of Luna's great lines in this story, her telling Amelia that she considers Sirius one of the Lupin children was probably my favorite.

And to the reviewer that commented about this story being "super old," someday you too will be old enough to realize that 5 1/2 years isn't "super old" unless it's an iPhone.

Thank you for sharing you creativity.

So like, we just gonna bypass the fact that they set up a mirror in a bathroom where they can watch naked minors? _

You know what? It's getting so much boring when you repeat the original work in your own words with some variations written between.
It's so boring because so many did this too, too many times. I'm out of here.