Reviews for Rise of the Dark Lady Hermione (adopted) |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Its a Mans life in the BDA. |
![]() ![]() Bwahahaha! Especially since I need to schedule an appointment tomorrow! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very funny. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a fantastic read! I honestly ish there was more |
![]() ![]() Thank you for an enjoyable read. |
![]() ![]() Oh my gosh this is so funny...but true LOL. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Still a very good one! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked the funny concepts of this story. Thank you for sharing this with us! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting thought about the bonfires of Beltane: after a winter of natural scarcity, the vermin had probably sequestered in the haystacks, or the bacteria-ladened straw used for winter "cleaning" in the stalls would be rather rancid and unhealthy. Thus, destroying these "havens" for health hazards was important. Not that the people of that time knew about bacteria, but the same can be correlated to reasons for the many "washings" and rituals of the Mosaic law for a nomadic people. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Draco to Narcissa. "I know you and Mrs Weasley think this is a great idea. I might, might be willing to spend time with Ginerva if she can cook like her mother. She brings enough risk to the table to be cautious. Oh why? 40 penis based attacks. Do you want grandchildren? You see my point?" I have read this story several times and heard this conversation in my mind. |
![]() ![]() ![]() eh you might want to edit it where the frisbee scene is. good story but you replaced the b in boy with a g and well that’s a very different word. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this story!... Until you started with the 'That Guy' stuff. I have dislexia and ADHD so I can't understand any of it and I kinda find it unnecessary. It would have been better if you gave them real names or color names. I think it just cunfusing and the drag out is to long yet to bland. I think you did really good for the first chapters but you lost me and I just don't like it now. I'm not trying to be mean but I wanted to give my honest opinion. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The simple love and wisdom here had me starting to cry. Yay Arthur! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just can’t |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why would insurance cover dental care? I thought that was covered by the NHS? I realize people get insurance for their houses and stuff, but schools and health has always been free. Or, well, paied by the goverment. I don't know the legal detail og why it costs nothing. Lol (I mean, aside from college. Which costs money, except you can apply for the goverment to pay it, so it's, like, free but with aditional paperwork. Lol) I just assumed Hogwarts cost money cuz they're stuck in the dark ages (or pre-victorian at the very least), and because the ministry is corrupt and the minister takes the money for himself and/or use it to bribe voters with. I would LOVE to see the look on Fudge's face if Hermione decided to get health and school economics up to modern BRITISH standards. Which is to say, free and paied by the goverment. Or is it charity? NHS at least. Yeah... politics... not my thing. Lol. Cheers! _ |