Amazing as always ️

I am amazed by your story. By changing one personality the characters go on a different course then canon. You're great at keeping everyone in character too. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

Very nice story ! I love how you write everything, I hope you will put other chapters someday, that's one of the greatest one piece fanfiction I ever read !
(Sorry if my english is bad, I'm from France, so my english is not very good :)
Thank you for your wonderful story !

I see want to continue!
Its so cool story. Im love he.

Russians reader.

El primer fanfiction de one piece que he leído, has dejado el listón muy arriba 10/10

Great job loved it thanks for all your hard work can’t wait to see what happens next

The fluffy one comes.

yippie new update!

This is great! With the next destination, Luffy will finally get the "fluffy one" that he always wanted. Which makes me wonder how interactions between Luffy and Chopper will go considering hes a doctor and that he will wanna do the best he can to treat Luffy. Also, i havent the slightest clue where youre going with Mr. 3 meeting up with Wapol, but it oughta make for some interesting confrontation. Cant wait for more!

This’ll be fun as all get!

Heh. I see some things are going to get *interesting*.

Good on Sabo for being the voice of reason but also AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

Dang Luffy really just beat Vivi senseless with facts. lol

KEEP BEING AWESOME!

nice chapter. Always good to see mature luffy this early in his adventure. His perspective is something you've got down to a T. its inspiring how well you write. Hope you don't end up killling Wapol as he's quite important for future with all Wapol Metal that Franky uses and With recent manga chapters.

Yeahhhh boiiii it’s back one of my fav fics

Great chapter, I can't wait to see more.