Reviews for The Girl-Who-Became-Harry-Potter
gabriellesantos2404 chapter 4 . 6/26
continue, a história está boa e tem um bom enredo.
supernaturalreader21 chapter 4 . 5/24
I can’t wait to find out what happens next
fightingstoryaddiction chapter 4 . 5/19
will there be more so can't wait to find out how your story ends like does she fight fire with fire like snake with snake and does VOLDEMORT BECOME EVEN MORE CREEPY TO HER CAUSE SHE IS A GIRL AND A MORE SNAKE USER DEADLY SPELL USER WILL HE STALKER AND TRY TO COURT HER LIKE A PEPE LA PEW SNAKE GET IT pepe la pew chasing thee kitty cat weewee
if so she'd so should run and hide shivers cause he's crazy not sure if he is bat shit crazy like bella and you know the saying don't mess with crazy and dont stick it in crazy hehehehehehe totally could see her saying that to tom riddles face like sorry im not interested in crazy cause you know the saying so like not sure if you know the saying but its like dont stick your dick in crazy unless your crazier but shoot voldemort would throw a tantrum even if its true with him and bella i think anyways thank you for writing this byebye
fightingstoryaddiction chapter 3 . 5/19
i can so see her doing the seth lighting trick with her has
fight sence

so what are you going to do now ittys bittys potty i have your wand crackle laughter
and Harry gets up and head is kind of down and then shoulders rasie up back straight and then lefts head up a little greeen flashing eyes appear alittle bit behind the hair covering potters face and then harrys arms rasie and strentch out and rasise hands and her fingers go up then down in one fast move lighting shoots out of her finger tips and makes her enimies suffer
Harrys like : I'm going to make you suffer for this bitch than crackle pop zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzap
and everyone not on harrys bad side is like DAMN remind me not to mess with her and than watch the person she is fighting with that got tased gets their privates stomped on by harrys foot...

number one goal is to do things common sense wise vs the magical worlds illogical way
learning wandless magic spells like summoning money muggle old coins worth alot or regular cash muggle or wizard or old jewelry stuff
spells like repairo to so you can dumpster dive in garabage cans or the dump or duddleys extra room of broken toys to use to sell or trade and the two other spells
like a edible plant rapid growth to make edible plants bloom quickly so you have something to eat for free espcially when you are a orphan or alone in that crazy world
and or like healing wandless
not sure what else but if ever in a world always look for a yellow book to find whats near by like a library to find books on edible weeds free food in the wild life and or if in a zombie walking dead the yellow book is the key to remember which addresses youve been to and what is in the address land like cateloging whats all on the property and have extra bases to bug out in if you lose your main base
so many what ifs and shivers id so be dead in anything im a coward and slow if in a walking dead world id be dead in a day in a week tops and or in harry potters world that depends on where the person would end up
like your character has alot of options as along as her relatives arent like cold hearted child abusers like the sick twisted kind than she gots to also watch out for dumbledore cause shivers that dude i don't like
but she landed in a time before she goes to hogwarts so thats good but man
if she landed as someone else in tom riddles time before hogwarts with magic she'd be okay but as a mugglleborn shed have to learn alot of magic and make her own business
cause as a female in toms time and as a muggleborn its either wed work in no good bad paying jobs with purebloodpigs or worse i wouldnt want to land in the beginning before hogwarts cause hell no very bad
furtherest is in dumbles time id ever want to end up in cause
like you said best to learn wandless magic like summoning repairo be good at farming with magic and
create a business in dumbles time when he's a boy before hogwarts or in toms time when hes a boy before hogwarts

whether as another orphan in toms orphanage or dumbledores sister Main goal get super magical wandless powers stat plus create a business more like a corporation business that would be so busyier than the ministry of magic why cause that business would also be a trap to snarl guess whoo?
Riddle why ? cause he was young with nothing no one helps he gots to fight and steal for stuff and after hogwarts he got a terrible job he impressed his childess slytherin friends but still his background and age left him with little options even if he had fantastic grades
if someone offered him a corperation like using tom riddle has a pepper potts than tom riddle would be so busy to busy running a international magical corperation business
and man dumbledore is crazy power hungery to look at his jobs man and shivers
what if you woke up as his sister i believe she die at 14 but what if when all three spells had crash and teleported her into are world and harry was her reborn and than when tom riddle goes to diagon ally first time with dumbledore his aberforth bro is there and meets him and his ex grin and grin is trying to get albus to join him but than aberforth those a spell at grin cause he hate both his brother and grin and then a fight brakes out and then pop again their spells hit but they keep on fighting not realizing a portal opened up and harry gets suched in and reverts back to ariana dumbledore at age 14 and
well harry remembers her life and has high powerful wandless magic but
now the fight stops aventurlly and tom had see this girl appear and informs the dumbledores but not grin he don't know cause he left before the auros showed up and like their shocked their sister is back alive but is more awhere like harry is mature is focused and can control the wandless magic easliy
knows the harry potter story and knows how troublesome albus dumbledore is and knows aberforth is cool
and knows gotta help tom guide him not control him but like be like a guide to help him with a better goal like being a ruthless businessman that does all the paperwork and dealing with people MWAHAHAHAHAHA
sneakly make a magical contract and trap the boss wizard and stop him from going coocoo for coco puffs
sorry over doing it in texting i wrote this and going to submit it even though one side of me says dont send abunch of rabbling text to a stranger if would be unkind but going to SMILE :)
Nozomi Akiyama chapter 4 . 3/26
Update please~
Cinderella56 chapter 4 . 3/14
Please update
Titan18 chapter 4 . 2/25
pls update soon
VoidMarvolo chapter 4 . 2/23
thaooaye chapter 4 . 2/13
That was so good wish there more
dinopoodle chapter 4 . 2/2
I like the fact she is prepared for the future. Maybe she can help an as pe get away from Dumbledore and voldy. Also help the malfoy family. Lucius could be s better person draco is misunderstood and the mom is not bad
Ghostisreading chapter 4 . 1/17
Love it! Can't wait for more!
FlowerChild23 chapter 4 . 1/13
Lol. Wow. I honestly cant wait to see what she does when she goes to Hogwarts!
nrtnmr chapter 4 . 1/12
great story, thanks. can't wait for more ;)
RebeccaRoy chapter 4 . 1/12
Wow, this Harry is one sneaky girl, and yes, a girl who had lived in the foster system, scratch that, any smart girl would do what Harry is doing. Good on her.
Golshad chapter 4 . 1/7
I really enjoy your story
Thanks for update
Please update the rest soon
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