Reviews for Unfeathered Angel
laura-thing chapter 1 . 1/16/2003
See! Bribe me with pictures and I'll review

i like all your stuff, but what i particularly like about this, apart from the fact that it's obviously well written and well researched is that you don't state the bleedin' obvious all the time, you put in *just* enough that the reader can grasp what you want them to and let their imagination do the rest. that's powerful good, woman.

well done. ten out of ten.
scribblemoose chapter 1 . 1/16/2003
You cut his hair! You wicked torturing-type person!

This is so wonderfully tense and painful. Just when I think every angle has been taken on Squall's psychology you come up with something new.

As to whether to continue it -whatever comes to you. This stands well on its own, but then again I can't say I wouldn't get all happy if I saw a sequel :)
Zanieey chapter 1 . 1/14/2003
This is really well-written! Very nice how you just implied a lot of things... You captured Squall's personality very nicely. Well, it was a great pschological little piece.

Yeah, go ahead with a prologue! You might as well, seeing as you've set up for it with all those implications.