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This is SOOOOOOOOOO adorable! I just LOVE your Thorne POVs! You're so good at getting his POV!

And yeah, CAN you do chapter 9? I'd love to read Thorne's thoughts! Actually, ANY chapter with Thorne's thoughts is good! Also, can you do Kai? If you can, I just want to now his thoughts in Cinder in all the times he met Cinder. Like in the elevator and other places! You know, 'cause we already get his POV in The Mechanic when they meet for the literal first time, and I would just LOVE to read his take on their other meetings!

Please PM if you DO do any of my suggestions!

That was beautiful. No words will ever describe that. Thank you.

Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!I LOVED IT!

So good

XD hehehehehe I love cresswell!

Yes, yes! Pretty please, do chapter 9!

This was really good, and I agree, you should do chapter 9 in Thorne's POV

Aaahh so good you should definitely do chapter 9!

I think you should do chapter 9 too, I bet you would do it fantastic, just like all of these ones! XD

so cute, absolutely love (and yes I would love to see chapter 9 in Thorne's POV) love your writing!

Awww, I loved it, great job! Again, I would love if you wrote chapter 9!:) I hope you continue with these, you really are doing a good job.

GAAAAA! Cuteness overload! I swear, Cree and Thorne are the perfect couple (well, besides Kai and Cinder...) I love how you capture Thorne's character, beautifully incorporating the dialogue from the book without having to add any of your own. Can you do Kaider now, pleeeeaase?

ommmgggg amazing!

Yaaaaayyy