Reviews for Invincible
alsdjhfgljkwebgh chapter 1 . 12/3
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Guest chapter 4 . 11/22
Okay, just read this over again and finally realized you are going to kick Harry Potter out of the wizarding world, which I am cool with, but, But, are you really going to leave us hanging on not punishing Delores somehow, someway? I think we all kinda got use to evil toady defending the Ministry no matter what in fanfiction, so pretty please, have her try something when its only Harry and Raven, pretty please!
khatre chapter 3 . 11/19
Stil dont know why Harry refuses to do magic ...
Robots? not alive. Transfigure them into rocks. Luthor? sute into .. strawberry jam WIN!
i know there is a big assed cast but .. all he seems to do is watch others fight ...
khatre chapter 2 . 11/19
How many times can a person tell a fic "Use MAGIC Dumbass!" in a single fic?
alot ...
marrietownsend4 chapter 1 . 8/19
Please update the story soon
sakkra chapter 4 . 7/19
So far, I like everything I read from you. I haven't touch the sparkling Vampire story yet, but maybe I will. How's life? Your last update to your profile was last year, so I am curious. If I may cast a wish, I'd like a chapter to your HP/SW story. But I won't demand it. After all your doing this stuff for free. Still. Ever thought about a Patreon? You can do the paying per chapter instead of monthly you know? Well... Where are my 2 cents?
a fan of this chapter 1 . 7/7
I'm going to post this message on all your stories that were updated after "I Still Haven't Found What I'm Looking For"

If other people read this review I want to make one thing clear, "I Still Haven't Found What I'm Looking For" is a masterpiece, a bit slow but so detailed and entertaining that it is worth reading despite being severely incomplete. and completely abandoned

I liked the story "I Still Haven't Found What I'm Looking For" a lot, I honestly hate that you abandoned it like that and even so you have been writing other stories for 4 years without putting even a slight update on this one... .not even a message that it was on hiatus or completely abandoned, we will be left wanting to know how the jedi order will react to having 100 dead jedis brought back to life... I sincerely hope you read this and at least explain because you have abandoned the story... but seeing that you have also abandoned your other stories I highly doubt it...
K chapter 4 . 6/26
Interesting, even though I am not into the superheroes genre. Shame it seems abandoned. Perhaps concentrating on just one story at a time might be a concept worth considering?
YMCM chapter 1 . 6/23
Dude I read this a long time ago and just recently I was going through Harry Potter fics I read and this just hit me: THIS IS AN INVINCIBLE CROSSOVER. Harry is a Viltrumite, and I hadn't the foggiest. I didn't even know about the invincible comics before the show lol
YMCM chapter 4 . 6/23
Dude I read this a long time ago and just recently I was going through Harry Potter fics I read and this just hit me: THIS IS AN INVINCIBLE CROSSOVER. Harry is a Viltrumite, and I hadn't the foggiest. I didn't even know about the invincible comics before the show lol
RDLV chapter 4 . 6/21
I hope you pick this one up again someday, it's really good.
Son-Of-Scorn chapter 1 . 6/21
I’ve read this a bunch over the years, and I’ve only now just realised that it’s probably an Invincible comic crossover, he’s a Viltrumite no?
Guest chapter 4 . 6/2
This is a good story I hope you update.
ElektrikRush chapter 4 . 5/29
Honestly a great read! I know it's been a long time since you updated but is there a possibility of a fifth chapter?
I am the box ghost chapter 4 . 5/5
Ok, I just read this story for the third time, love it by the way hope more comes soon. But as I said just read it and it hit me, the only DC character that fits James's description of his biological father is the monster DOOMSDAY. Think about it get hit with the killing curse once and it will never work again same as DOOMSDAY.
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