This is actually an excellent fic, and blends both elements of the settings together nicely. Alt Power Taylor is pretty damn common, but the fun is seeing WHICH power she gets, how she uses it, and how the plot diverges due to it. This has all the staples for a good fic- nice characterisation, interesting dialogue, and a promising myth arc. I also like the way that you're having Taylor develop, and enjoyed the way Danny was handled. Also- Moar Parian. Seriously, its really cool that she's a main character for this. On another note, I'm aware Taylor is straight, but I can't help but ship her with Parian- still waiting for Taylor to actually realise Parian's sexuality (Unless she already knows and I just read over it). This chapter- I enjoyed the Undersiders finally taking a role, and Lisa breaking. For the future, I can't wait for Taylor to hit the big leagues. I assumed that things would heat up after Bakuda, and that Taylor would go on a Rampaging Rampage, but surprisingly she didn't. Wonder how the Slaughterhouse Arc will go...

So to conclude, this is a pretty good fic, and seems to be at least semi-regular in updates, so good job. This fic deserves more attention, I feel. Either way, good luck with writing. Undying Soul out.

I was wondering what would happen if Tattletale's power got a glimpse of Taylor. Now I know.

Bar some minor spelling & grammar mistakes, this story is badass! Looking forward to more.

And a Sabah/Taylor pairing is definitely different.

Great chapter, I love the prophecy from tattletale. This should be a fun arc.

Oh, THERE's the Undersiders. Also, Tattletale Broke. love it. lol :P

I can only wonder how long?

very good work

Uh... I think he's forgetting the part where Rogue capes have to "out" themselves on paper in order to actually get a job and earn money as a cape. To be fair, Circus has no way of knowing about the PRT, or at least certain parts of it, knowing that Taylor is Keynote, but still. I wonder if he'll complain about Taylor's ability to knock stuff out of his bag in front of Coil. Or is it "she?" Either way, that detail is bound to make Coil curious regardless of how he learns about it. If Taylor ends up in a situation with an opponent that also has the power of extra-dimensional storage, then she's bound to shock more than just the hostile para-human with her ability to access what was once exclusive to the para-human.

On the bright side, Taylor's magic lessons didn't break the plumbing in a way that's just as bad as burning down the house. Although she may need to find a better place to practice in spite of how quickly she was able to adapt a recently learned spell.

great chapter , love the way this story is going, keep up the excellent work! Keep the good writing and hope for more update soon can't wait to read more:)

very good work

Well, this looks interesting.

Wow, this Story is really good. Looking forwards to more. (New Subscriber, Gain! :P)

Wondering if the Undersiders are going to show up, and how they would play into things if they do.

One suggestion though: More obvious Scene changes. Even just a bunch of lines separating two scenes.

Boco didn't say anything but Mog knew he liked Taylor a lot. She had kind heart, even if it was burt and marred by darkness…

Burt, not a word. Also good job

Yeah its getting a bit intrusive, as much as I like your other characters I'm going to have to drop this.

I don't really understand what is happening right now umm, ugh, I'm kind of hoping we stay in brockton bay, instead of fighting shadows. There are enough enemies to deal with without that.

Reminding me of Ansen with the whole opening of doors bit. God remembering him pulling out other peoples hearts is rather freaky.