Reviews for A Skittering Heart |
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ConstanceJ chapter 43 . 5/26/2018 Rad as heck. |
bavalos chapter 2 . 4/27/2018 Love the choice. Nostalgic memories of indecision coming back lol |
Soul D Phoenix chapter 43 . 4/23/2018 Really like the story, hope you start updating again soon. |
Guest chapter 15 . 3/15/2018 ...? This story has gone off the rails... |
Guest chapter 14 . 3/15/2018 The fuck?! That escallated quickly. |
Guest chapter 13 . 3/14/2018 Sabah is 18?! And she has a Master's in Engineering? That's not a thing that happens. You make it sound like she had the degree *before* she got her powers, sooo... yeah. Doesn't make sense. |
Guest chapter 8 . 3/14/2018 Oh, hey! It's that OC that had a brief scene, with a friggin' chocobo?! And a moogle? Best OC is best. |
frytrix chapter 12 . 2/18/2018 I am confused please tell me, why is Tailor waving around a sword suddenly when she picked the staff? |
Zane Tribal Tyne Alexandros chapter 7 . 12/25/2017 ...Wait until she discovers the Magic. |
Zane Tribal Tyne Alexandros chapter 6 . 12/25/2017 Melody Of the Lost huh? May its song be heard across worlds... |
Zane Tribal Tyne Alexandros chapter 5 . 12/25/2017 Thats right! True Courage is Facing you fears! |
Zane Tribal Tyne Alexandros chapter 3 . 12/25/2017 Oh Taylor, You are about to become SO much more than you were... |
Zane Tribal Tyne Alexandros chapter 2 . 12/25/2017 I LOVE this! |
Zane Tribal Tyne Alexandros chapter 1 . 12/25/2017 Like this. |
Caliburn0 chapter 43 . 12/10/2017 Great story, a bit spotty on the spelling and grammar sometimes, but nothing too bad. It is probably one of, if not the best Kingdom Hearts related story I have read. And the Worm setting lends itself easily to drama and character development. Even though the story goes a bit all over the place, it never really looses itself or the core of what makes it good. Your Taylor is a great character, and the introspective strands of this fic is great to read. The story is funny and has good fight scenes, although the pacing could use a bit of work. It has many flaws, but the story has heart, and is greatly entertaining. Thank you for taking the time to write it. |