It's really lousy that this story was left unfinished after forcing us all to slog through SIXTEEN chapters of it! Geese! I'm certainly NOT going to read the other long'ish offering found here. Sure, a lot of authors abandon stories. However, most of them don't go on blithely posting new ones until a decent amount of time has gone bye.

The really sad thing about this one is that it had the potential to be superb. Now, it's doubtful if it will ever amount to anything. Sigh!

You leave it off here? Now what? I hope the rest of the story is somewhere.

Not read the previous chapters yet but this makes me determined to make time to do so.

I've followed your OC Cheri through more than one adventure and fandom. She's quirky and sexy and I like her a lot - I usually cringe when 'romantic' OCs are paired up with a known character, but not with your Cheri. She's as interesting as any of the fandom characters and would hold her own as a stand-alone character in her own story. Wherever and whenever your muse decides to roam, I hope Cheri will be along for the ride. Quirk on and best wishes to you.

I'm not sure if there will be additional chapters but other than despising the Germans, I'm still not sure what's going on. I'll check back if I can keep logged in - I'm not holding my breath.

obviously Moffitt has some idea to what's going on...but I don't. My fault.

I somewhat the plots are - evil designs that are being planned - just hope the good guys - RP and Dietrich can stop all this evil so that they can get back to winning the war(well Dietrich can't win but he's a good guy anyway. Tully- where are you?

Poor Dietrich - we know his plans won't work out, but he can always hope. Hints of prejudice, some of course still exist today.

Obviously these people fly, but I'm guessing that the guys, irregardless of the speed, would prefer to drive their trusty jeeps.

Dietrich I know so this chapter made sense. I'm quite sure he will have a run-in with the "guys". I certainly know the SS are the bad guys. I'm hoping for some more tully action here.

well. I skimmed this chapter because I had no idea who these people were, not the author's fault however.

well, dumb me. I finally noticed that Moffitt's name was at the top of the chapter so I backtracked and sure enough the previous chapter, whose narrator was unknown to me, was Hitch. So I guess I'm oriented for now.

I can't tell who is talking in this chapter but tully has arrived so I'm happy.

MIRACULOUSLY , THRU NO EFFORT OF MY OWN, I'm LOGGED BACK IN AND MY 2 REVIEWS HAvE SHOWN UP. Chapter 3 helped me kind of know what is going on. I'm waiting for the 2 privates to show up [ hitch and tully). on to chapter 4.

I recognized the games in chapter 2 band got the gist of the plot but I'll have to spend the rest of the night trying to figure out how to log in... I go thru this once a month. somehow I get "logged out" and can't get logged back in. sorry - I'll try to get back to this later.