Reviews for Twisting Time
MarilynT chapter 47 . 1/12
Just finished reading. Loved it!
GeorgeTobor chapter 11 . 12/25/2021
SECRETS!

Dumb a a door is the one who keeps too many secrets!

But the manipulative old fool wants everyone else to tell all...

Albus Dumbledore is the true dark lord of the story.
Tom will merely kill you after a crucio or two.
Albus will control your life for his greater good.

Harry had no say in his life.
Not where he lived
Quiddich was not his idea but Minervas
I am positive Albus set up the first meeting with the Weasleys
So Ron was chosen as his friend
Harry had never know love, Ginny was chosen for him
Sacafice himself for the wizarding world that saw him tortured and scorned as a liar?!
Harry was a puppet, Albus pulled his strings...

Dumbledore had to know Peter was the spy, Snape is not the only mind reader.
But Voldy had to be stopped, the wrong dark lord was winning.
Dumbledore somehow got the Potters CLOAK of INVISIBILITY, it could have saved them!
The Potters were set up!
Who is so concerned about second chances for death eaters?
Harry lost his family and suffered for years.
Dear Draco(evil to be shown the light) has his family, was never a slave to muggles.

Albus is evil and Rowling loves to have others suffer.

This much fanfiction is only written if the original is badly flawed.
GeorgeTobor chapter 8 . 12/24/2021
There is a good if short fic titled LILY LEAVES.
I forget the writer but I think it is 4 to 6 chapters, maybe 20k words or so.

Voldy attacks, kills James, Lily runs upstairs and grabs Harry. I think she escspes on a broom, not sure.
Tom is killed by an explosive set off by a house elf, yes the elf lives.
Lily leaves Britain with Harry. There is no boy-who-lived, they start new lives far away under new names.

Magical Britain eventually gets it's due. Harry and Tom never meet.
GeorgeTobor chapter 3 . 12/24/2021
Truely Epic Tales have more than one hero.

Rowling thought that by having Harry an abused friendless orphan he could be a lone hero.
Stupid.

Heroes NEED friends, family, support.
With all the pain in his life Harry should have suicided!
Or become DARK!

Superman had Lois and Jimmy and later the Justice League.

Harry started at negative 1000 and never even reached zero.
His story is a tragedy.
He had no clue what love is, never had any real choice in his own life and while Tom died the Malfoys lived.
Draco had a better life!
Good lost...
Meccadrake chapter 8 . 12/16/2021
Should be titled Dumbledor and Dumbledor jr changes history while lying to everyone else.
SinnohEevee chapter 21 . 11/11/2021
I know Bellatrix would report Regulus to Voldemort, but would Narcissa?
SinnohEevee chapter 18 . 11/11/2021
Should have gone with Dumbledore.
Guest chapter 36 . 11/2/2021
I couldn’t understand why Ron wasn’t one of Harry’s best friends, since Hermione and Harry had met each other late. And I think Sirius deserves peace after the war, not a break from it
Guest chapter 36 . 11/2/2021
It’s a great story, but there are some regrets. Dumbledore was not as wise and powerful as he was in the original, and the greatest wizard died quickly and quietly. The other thing is I wish Harry had more of a part in it. In the end, I couldn’t accept the logic that Sirius didn’t want to hurt Harry, so he chose to die. If I were Harry, bringing Sirius back would be more important than a moment of pain. Nothing hurts more than the loss of a loved one
Guest chapter 23 . 11/1/2021
When James and Sirius met Harry through stone,why didn't they include Lily?Lily would be as time flies,the chances to see original Harry flies
Guest chapter 21 . 11/1/2021
I still think when Sirius went back in ,he wiped out everyone in the original timeline. After all, the new Harry doesn’t have the same experiences as the boy who lived, the different experiences that make two Harry new Harry doesn’t have the same memories. I’m more inclined to think that Sirius went back in time to form two parallel worlds
sherryola chapter 47 . 10/15/2021
I truly enjoyed this story very much. But I hate the end and wish I hadn't read it at all. I read HP fan fic to undo the things I didn't like in canon, specifically sirius dying. But it's my fault for not checking the last chapter first. lol. I loved having James and Lily and seeing Harry have an almost normal life. I didn't like Ron not being Harry's best friend, but there wasn't much Harry in the story so it worked. You plotted a lot of twists and kept me guessing which was fantastic.
Sohaila 2005 chapter 47 . 6/23/2021
Sirius was mentally...what? 49? That's not so old to get tiered of life. You make it seem like he lived for 200 years! In Canon Dumbledore lived more than 100 years and he didn't get exactly tired but simply accepted death when Snape told him he would die in the summer before sixth year but Sirius is tierd and chooses death after 49 years?
pycus13 chapter 32 . 6/20/2021
Uff, your climaxes are underwhelming and much too wordy. It took me a month to slug through it.
Harleyquinn47 chapter 10 . 6/18/2021
I have always been looking for a story somewhat like this! I love it! Thank you so much for entertaining me during the Summer!
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