Reviews for Twisting Time
Guitarlover56784 chapter 7 . 1/25
So you are writing the events of what happened, but you aren't emotionally connecting the characters to what's being written. I feel no attachment to anyone, even Sirius, who is being set up as the main character
Petrina Missons chapter 21 . 11/29/2022
Great story so far.. really loving it!
Arumia chapter 37 . 11/14/2022
Half the book was about how Sirius shouldn’t suffer and should enjoy life, I don’t see the point of not doing so his Harry and everyone else keeps telling him he needs to find love to enjoy life, this will stop him from ever doing so again
Guest chapter 1 . 9/18/2022
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if
you only looked at the word warning! Once there was
a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and
she lives in a mental hospital, because she killed her
mom and dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the
staff in the hospital so the More-government
decided that the best idea was to get rid of her so
they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as
possible but it went wrong the machine they were
using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for
hours until she died. Now every week on the day of
her death she returns to the person that read this
letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps
into your room and kills you slowly, bycutting you
and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to
ten other pictures on the site, and she will haunt
someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake,
apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten
comments in the next ten minutes you will have the
best day of your life tomorrow,
Danger1967 chapter 47 . 9/15/2022
Love this story. Great job. Look forward to reading more of your stories.
ayalove0 chapter 7 . 8/16/2022
This is sooooo gooood
Guest chapter 47 . 8/6/2022
The ending was really emotional but I'm happy for sirius he got in best friend him side one Last time he got Harry a better life and see a grown up Harry sirius well die to protect Harry that what I want to see not like accident he is our Hero and thank you for writing such a amazing story
Ceroniss chapter 47 . 7/26/2022
I loved this story, I found the ending very sad, but it made perfect sense and it was an excellent way of doing it. The story was well written and definitely brought emotions to the surface. I look forward to reading more of your stories!
Bluenait chapter 2 . 7/25/2022
right fuck Dumbels fuck this fic
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 47 . 6/26/2022
This was such a great fic! I still hate that Sirius had to die. :(
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 46 . 6/26/2022
Wtf, Sirius?! You could’ve lived!
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 45 . 6/26/2022
Sirius better come back to life!
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 44 . 6/26/2022
Wtf?! You did not just kill Sirius after all that! And Dumbledore has to die?! Wtf?!
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 43 . 6/26/2022
Sirius better live! Please and thank you.
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 42 . 6/26/2022
Fuck! They did t think about Jack!
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