|Reviews for Not even a first chance!|
| Guest chapter 53 . 9/5
Great story. Thanks I am still not a fan of Lupin/Tonks, but oh well I enjoyed it. Thanks again.
| jaydorais chapter 49 . 8/15
ty... "it gives him orange hair."... was waiting for that after the first 2 syringes.
| Guest chapter 16 . 8/11
funny there was more then enough evidice to me for dumbles to be found guilty the only reason is he not is you using dumbles as most of the plot for the story.
| Guest chapter 14 . 8/11
this story sucks your telling me there is no outrage at all for mass murders being set free all over the place I call bull crap your story is just a crack fic and not even a good one.
| Guest chapter 12 . 8/11
dumbledore to power full to bring down I call bull crap the law is the law and everyone has to fallow it your not throwing him in jail because it would mess your story up it's the same thing every other writer on this site does when it's bad Dumbledore or he just randomly dies somehow never faces justice.
| Guest chapter 11 . 8/11
purebloods playing a muggle game called bridge yeah don't think so go's against everything they beleave in.
| RonRR chapter 7 . 8/10
Bagnold first the mold every bit as much as Fudge.
Bagnold put an innocent man in Azkaban without a trial and let off most of the Death Eaters on the idiotic Imperious Defence.
Thank you for writing,
| Guest chapter 53 . 8/4
This was excellent story, but I thought Hobby would end Emily's house-elf. You seemed to make a big deal about her in the beginning, but it all worked out.
| old-crow chapter 53 . 7/25
Each chapter was enjoyable.
Thanks for sharing your story.
| old-crow chapter 43 . 7/25
I love the premise of your Harry coming back as Hobby. I don't recall seeing that in any other tale - and in this age of just short of a million HP tales out there, that is really saying something.
I'm still a bit unclear as to your DD's motivation - either his way is the only way, or he really was hoping for future glory. I'm not certain that he knows either.
I have seen Pandora killed off in a few dozen tales. I hope this isn't one of them. Either way, hopefully Hobby will be keeping a close eye on her.
All the best,
A very Old-Crow
| MajinBakaHentai chapter 13 . 7/17
One nitpick, about the "barf his breakfast" line about having a rat in a pocket. Domesticated pet rats are actually very clean creatures, regularly grooming in a manner very similar to cats.
| Scorpion.Sorcerer7 chapter 53 . 7/9
Thank you, Senawario. The story was a delight to read/listen to.
Yes, Hobby was essentially Overpowered for the enemies he faced, but the wrap up you made of all the enemies was good. The Sirius / Rosmerta angle is rarely seen in the fic world. I'm so very glad that you stayed away from relationships in this story.
Hobby coming out as the main person is really cool. I like the images you input in us with the last few sentences.
Thanks again for your work. It was great to read it.
| RevDorothyL chapter 53 . 6/28
I adore the idea of freed and independent elves becoming the defacto FBI/MI5 of wizarding Britain, keeping eternal vigilance against tyrants and other destructive more-undemocratic-than-usual forces from within that society.
| RevDorothyL chapter 49 . 6/28
Oh, dear! I wonder how the stone ever got into the Donald's hands? :)
Wickedly accurate and funny.
| Fallow54 chapter 53 . 6/18
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