Reviews for Not even a first chance!
slytherinsal chapter 7 . 10/28/2020
I know you didn't want reviews, but I liked the Asterix reference.
Steve-Arkarian chapter 1 . 10/28/2020
Luckily the story is complete and I'm going to give it a go, though right now I'm really confused and I guess I'll figure it out by reading because otherwise how in the world can he reappear as Dobby but then still get together with Hermione? I guess I'll see.
Guest chapter 53 . 10/3/2020
I really enjoyed this story! It was amazing to see all the things that Hobby could do. I like that we got to see Harry grow up with a better life. Thank you for writing this.
Soraslove chapter 3 . 10/4/2020
I can't wait for dobby to get rid of the death eaters, gg.
Soraslove chapter 1 . 10/4/2020
Ayy, harry got a deal.
laraquick chapter 53 . 9/28/2020
Wonderful story. Very innovative redo with a uniquely elvish Harry.
PD31 chapter 20 . 9/23/2020
Crawley isn't in London; it's actually a fair distance from it
Guest chapter 1 . 9/3/2020
I would have loved this story if Harry had gone back as himself rather than an over-powered house elf. That part was just weird.
AvidReader2425 chapter 53 . 9/3/2020
Thank you for an excellent and extremely enjoyable story
AvidReader2425 chapter 52 . 9/3/2020
Definitely an enjoyable story overall
AvidReader2425 chapter 51 . 9/3/2020
Thanks for another enjoyable chapter
AvidReader2425 chapter 50 . 9/3/2020
Thanks for another great chapter
AvidReader2425 chapter 49 . 9/3/2020
Thanks for another chapter, so personally I don’t think the politics were really needed at the end.
AvidReader2425 chapter 48 . 9/3/2020
Another excellent chapter, and I’m sure whatever he has planned will no doubt be rather humorous
AvidReader2425 chapter 47 . 9/3/2020
Out of curiosity I looked up the house elf life expectancy, and I was surprised to see that they live on average about 200 years. Add an a powerful wizard core, and you might get a Life expectancy of about 250 to 300 maybe, just my own guess.
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