|Reviews for Not even a first chance!|
| AvidReader2425 chapter 7 . 9/2/2020
Another entertaining chapter
| AvidReader2425 chapter 6 . 9/2/2020
Another excellent chapter, thanks
| AvidReader2425 chapter 5 . 9/2/2020
Thanks for another excellent chapter
| AvidReader2425 chapter 4 . 9/2/2020
Another interesting chapter, thanks.
| AvidReader2425 chapter 3 . 9/2/2020
Another interesting chapter, thanks
| AvidReader2425 chapter 2 . 9/2/2020
Thanks for another interesting and entertaining chapter
| AvidReader2425 chapter 1 . 9/2/2020
I have to admit, I really Didn’t expect the dobby twist, honestly looking forward to how things develop
| marvinkitfox1 chapter 5 . 8/29/2020
Why would a goblin lie to a paying customer?
And WHY would the goblin do so in SUCH A TRANSPARENT WAY?
"We can tell you if he is alive or dead. The other questions are beyond our ken"
then 5 seconds later
"Your boy is alive. However he appears to be in great pain"
It is so blatantly obvious that the goblin is lying, as he states two completely contradictory facts directly following each other.
I can understand the goblin wanting to "sow some discord among wizards", but WHY do so with Three-Stooges-Level incompetent lying?
| BigRig2.0 chapter 1 . 8/27/2020
| Astramilitarum chapter 53 . 8/14/2020
A different angle from the norm and a good one.
But even until the end him being a house elf just bothered me kind of, after all he did he basically just gave up his own life and happiness, in the end the story just left me unsatisfied with the end.
| montanoaries9 chapter 1 . 8/14/2020
yackk for everything you choosed to be a house elf
| szabo.alexandra1991 chapter 53 . 7/26/2020
it was AWESOME! virtual hug!
| Jazzielady76 chapter 41 . 7/26/2020
That asshole bumbledrork! Grrrrr! Kill him! Kill him with fire!
| Guest chapter 51 . 7/24/2020
Poor Severus. I blame Albus.
| Guest chapter 49 . 7/24/2020
So Trump. Much agree! (LMAO!)