Reviews for Not even a first chance! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() nice always good to see malfoy burn |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it ! Everything is going Hobby's way for now and I hope it never stop. My only complaint: your chapter are a little too short, I finish them too quickly. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE IT |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this take no shit badass Harry/Hobby hugs |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice |
![]() ![]() ![]() Marvelous! Very enjoyable, your tongue-in-cheek humor gives the entire story the feel of a prank. I look forward to reading more of your excellent writing, thank you for sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Up to here is a greate new point of view for time turn story. Good |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well He could have just gotten the job. But Ding dong the with is dead mean old witch the wicked witch! |
![]() ![]() ![]() he had to be a smart ass he should just trow her in the ocean and everyone would think she escaped |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dumb-as-a-door vs Hobby the house elf! LOL I LOVE IT! |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story so far |