Reviews for Not even a first chance!
Vegasman59 chapter 7 . 2/20/2016
Well He could have just gotten the job. But Ding dong the with is dead mean old witch the wicked witch!
DeathCrawler chapter 7 . 2/20/2016
he had to be a smart ass he should just trow her in the ocean and everyone would think she escaped
Vegasman59 chapter 6 . 2/18/2016
Dumb-as-a-door vs Hobby the house elf! LOL I LOVE IT!
DeathCrawler chapter 6 . 2/18/2016
nice chapter
god of all chapter 6 . 2/18/2016
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon...
redwolf23456 chapter 5 . 2/16/2016
Great story so far
Vegasman59 chapter 5 . 2/16/2016
Nothing like sowing a bit of discord on the evil ones. I LOVE IT! Now to get them fighting among st Themselves.
DeathCrawler chapter 5 . 2/16/2016
Interesting will follow it for a while
Vegasman59 chapter 4 . 2/15/2016
Damn interesting, This could be really good. Nothing like the elf under the stairs.
god of all chapter 3 . 2/13/2016
Great chapter story so far please continue this story soon.
Stormbow chapter 1 . 2/12/2016
Hermione is going to marry a house elf? How's that going to work? Is she going back too as the house elf "Slinky"?

Unique approach to Reptilia- type of story, but just not sure all of your pieces fit together.
desireejones99 chapter 1 . 2/12/2016
very different
Valerian candidate chapter 1 . 2/12/2016
... I ... you. Wow you got me speechless. Unique idea, not sure I like the "hero" though. I am confused about the terms though. Does that mean Dobby will get together with Hermione? Or that Harry as Dobby will guide the time line to give Harry a normal chance at life and the girl?
The Muse of Apollo chapter 1 . 2/11/2016
how is he supposed to marry Hermione if he becomes Dobby? Consider me confused.
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