| Reviews for Not even a first chance! |
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   Vegasman59 chapter 7 . 2/20/2016 Well He could have just gotten the job. But Ding dong the with is dead mean old witch the wicked witch! |
| DeathCrawler chapter 7 . 2/20/2016 he had to be a smart ass he should just trow her in the ocean and everyone would think she escaped |
| Vegasman59 chapter 6 . 2/18/2016 Dumb-as-a-door vs Hobby the house elf! LOL I LOVE IT! |
| DeathCrawler chapter 6 . 2/18/2016 nice chapter |
| god of all chapter 6 . 2/18/2016 Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon... |
| redwolf23456 chapter 5 . 2/16/2016 Great story so far |
| Vegasman59 chapter 5 . 2/16/2016 Nothing like sowing a bit of discord on the evil ones. I LOVE IT! Now to get them fighting among st Themselves. |
| DeathCrawler chapter 5 . 2/16/2016 Interesting will follow it for a while |
| Vegasman59 chapter 4 . 2/15/2016 Damn interesting, This could be really good. Nothing like the elf under the stairs. |
| god of all chapter 3 . 2/13/2016 Great chapter story so far please continue this story soon. |
| Stormbow chapter 1 . 2/12/2016 Hermione is going to marry a house elf? How's that going to work? Is she going back too as the house elf "Slinky"? Unique approach to Reptilia- type of story, but just not sure all of your pieces fit together. |
| desireejones99 chapter 1 . 2/12/2016 very different |
| Valerian candidate chapter 1 . 2/12/2016 ... I ... you. Wow you got me speechless. Unique idea, not sure I like the "hero" though. I am confused about the terms though. Does that mean Dobby will get together with Hermione? Or that Harry as Dobby will guide the time line to give Harry a normal chance at life and the girl? |
| The Muse of Apollo chapter 1 . 2/11/2016 how is he supposed to marry Hermione if he becomes Dobby? Consider me confused. |