and this one needs reformatting as well

please come back and reformat this chapter

Well I did like this story, but like many they stay nice to dumblass and I agree with him on his treatment of Harry. No Snape will now finally pay his dues. Or dumbass losing his magic and being told he should have been in a retirement home. The wizarding world lives in the 1800s, they defiantly have rules on heirs or last of their clan.

Might read the next chapter. But I think I am done. This is like the 3rd or 4th fanfic I read where Harry doesn't payback is abuser. Snapes a manchild abuser and should have never been a teacher. And I never liked the headmaster.

Thanks for the chapter!

Great story!

Excellent oath!

everything went by so fast and it's only chapter 2.

An excellent story told very well. Your battle scene was epic and I was glad you allowed some deaths, especially Xeno. One of semi-main characters was bound to bite it, though a more main character would be acceptable given Ms. Rowlings deaths of Dd and Fred. At any rate, a satisfying read. Keep up the good work, I look forward to reading more of your stories. Thanks for your writing efforts.

thanks

Haven't read this chapter yet, just wanted to say you should've named this chapter (7A Sirius Talk".

Started well, but got ridiculous fast.

This was BEAUTIFUL.

Lovely work!

Just wanted to point out a small continuity error- Luna would actually not be 17, but 15 when the final battle ends, with her birthday falling on 13th February officially.

Again, lovely story. Hoping to see more exclusive Harmony stories from you.

shouldn't Harry also be head of Slytherin due to right of conquest, as he defeated Riddle 3 times in magical combat? First there was the face-off with Quirrelmort, then Tom Riddle's diary and third in the graveyard by forcing Riddle's wand to submit via Priori Incantato.
Also was there no provisions for Harry in the will? Such as naming who the Potter's wanted as his guardians. As they were in hiding, it would be advisable to have such as a just in case of situation.

This has been a very interesting story…I am forgoing my usual wait until the end to post one comment. Dobby has been a great help, and I am disturbed, disappointed, distracted…some ‘D’ word…that Harry hadn’t bonded him yet. I know he doesn’t know the need, but surely one of his allies would say something, at least for privacy’s sake? Anyway, I hope Harry does right by him, Dobby is just great…

Who is Luna 17 she’s the same age as Ginny