Reviews for Harmony Bound
DarkPhoenix101 chapter 34 . 8/22
This was a heck of a lot better written than a lot of soul bond H/Hr fics I've read. That said I was a bit disappointed with the way you portrayed Hermione. As the story progressed she seemed to take much more of a back seat to Harry.
ikezillas1 chapter 7 . 8/11
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ikezillas1 chapter 7 . 8/11
Cassandra30 chapter 5 . 8/10
They should have expected the consummation of their marriage bond to be spectacular as well.
Cassandra30 chapter 4 . 8/10
Sounds like a great week.
Cassandra30 chapter 3 . 8/10
The Grangers are taking it pretty good.
Cassandra30 chapter 2 . 8/10
Surprise, Mom and Dad! Look what followed me home!
Cassandra30 chapter 1 . 8/10
Great start!
Quaziemoto chapter 15 . 8/5
Your right A Rainbow Dream is a greate book this is another story that i keep on my Data Base that i go back to every so often.
Quaziemoto chapter 15 . 8/5
I really like this story, it keep this 78 year old entertained.
I have probably read this story 3 or 4 times since I came across
it in 2020.
Darknessdawns chapter 34 . 6/20
Overall this was an interesting take on the soulbond and Lord Potter tropes. I quite liked how most of the story focused on the relationship between Harry and Hermione, their family, allies, and politics. Unfortunately the ending almost felt like it went in a different direction with the chaos of the final battle. I honestly wasn't expecting Harry to challenge Voldemort to a duel but I really should have. I think the reason it felt a bit off was due to how sudden the idea presented itself. There wasn't much lead up just about a chapter or two before the battle happened then the aftermath and end. At any rate, the story was interesting and I did enjoy it.
paulieandgilbert chapter 5 . 5/30
I'm a bit confused. there have been a few mentions of Harry and Hermione going to pubs. Are the drinking laws different in the UK? Isn't Harry still 14 and Hermione 15?
paulieandgilbert chapter 1 . 5/30
This has an Interesting start, but I have a question, why on earth would two teenagers tell an old man all about their sudden feelings for each other in intimate detail in front of an audience?
Under Harry's immediate circumstances, I can't imagine why either of them would answer him the way they did. They certainly didn't owe him any such explanation into their personal feeling or actions!
On another note, wouldn't Hermoine be affronted by Silverstaff suggesting she might be taken as wife OR CONCUBINE? I can't imagine a muggle born not being either insulted and/or outraged at the insinuation.
As this is only the first chapter, perhaps the answers will be forthcoming.
Ohma chapter 3 . 5/20
your characters talk too much... it wouldn't really be a problem if it weren't for the fact that we already know about what they're talking about.

Being told something I already know, several times is tiring...

Enjoying the story so far though.
geenakmom chapter 34 . 5/7
Happy to have found your story. Enjoyed reading it!
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