Really good Story. And I loved the ending as it does what so many don't. It gives closure.

so this just potrays the grangers as somewhat momey hungry, mad till they saw bank statements

You know id be a lot less mad if my 15 year old daughter’s new husband has 800 million dollars in his bank account

I don't know how I missed this story in all my readings of HP FanFiction but I'm sure glad I did finally find it!
A reasonably long and well engaged story with a lot of well filled in backstory.
I seldom review as I can't even write a short story to save my soul and I feel that if I can't write a story then what right to I gave to review a story.
This story thou I had to say something about.

Hi flowerchild, I've been re-reading your story and it's great. I have a couple of your stories in my C2 and downloaded on my Kindle. But I have a few MINOR comments...

1. "Foreswear" is not a word. "Forswear" is a word, but it means pretty much the opposite of what you want.

2. "Alright, it's a quarter past 0800." (and some other examples) No military or quasi-military person would say this. For the above example, they would say "Alright, it's 0815."

3. Watch your usage of reflexive pronouns (myself, himself, etc.). Always an object, always refers back to the subject (eg, "I hit myself with a hammer"). Never a subject.

Now back to reading and finishing this one...

It needs the death of Ron Weasley.

Rushed, OOC, girly-mushy, low quality and that's just first half of ch1. Hard drop.

yes, because we want to read about undage sex. you should be registered pedo

Also its VERY obvious that the sex scenes are written by a child. It kinda creeps me out.

This story feels very flat and kind of…glib I guess. It feels like there is little to no emotional reactions and they go from one situation to another with little impact I guess. This story also lacks setting descriptions. It might be my current mood but I’m dropping this here. I might come back later.

This was a heck of a lot better written than a lot of soul bond H/Hr fics I've read. That said I was a bit disappointed with the way you portrayed Hermione. As the story progressed she seemed to take much more of a back seat to Harry.

h. . Z

don't.

They should have expected the consummation of their marriage bond to be spectacular as well.

Sounds like a great week.