You are a talented writer. And I think you've captured the essence of their relationship very well! congrats!

This is a really well written story and an interesting take on Blake's point of view in all this. Well done.

Hi~! I really like the story u wrote here! It's my first time being on fanfiction so I'm a little nervous to write down comments. *nervous laugh* I love to read more so I'll check out the rest!

Yes! Your writing is very well done! ~
I do hope at some point you write more if this pair.
Hopefully something a bit more sadistic. X3

It's GREAT! PLZ make a sequel for this story!

LUV IT! :)
Hope 2 see more~

I like it! Is there going to be a sequel to this story?
If there is, how will it end? Hope to read more soon!

I LOVE THIS! I can't wait to tell my friends about this! (I hope u don't mind telling me this to them) I hope there's a sequel to this story (I hope rated M) and/or 2 alternative routes from this story, 1 good ending & 1 bad ending, now that would be interesting! :3

Very well done x

Huh, that was really good. Adam is one of the coolest characters IMO, and hopefully as he appears more and his relationship with Blake gets more fleshed out he'll start appearing more in Fanfiction.