Reviews for Gumming The Works
Guest chapter 3 . 4/21/2017
Good Nice
naruto chapter 6 . 2/24/2017
great chapter keep it up chapter 6 . 9/13/2016
yes fuck yes
Jacob.Uzumaki chapter 6 . 9/4/2016
I fucking love it i swear all of his vic and Timmy story's are the shit 10/10
x-mariaa chapter 5 . 6/25/2016
Also, it just occurred to me after I posted my first review, but... Vicky better pull out the Plan B because he just, um... you know... ...inside of her... so, yeah.

This could go from hot lemons to Secret Life of the American Teenager faster than they can say, "oops!"
x-mariaa chapter 6 . 6/25/2016
I loved this story. Really, everything about this one was just perfect. It wasn't a wise idea to read this in public; however, because everybody around me was staring at me as if I were a mad woman because of the way that I was grinning. I couldn't help it; the lemons got that reaction out of me, haha.

One of my favorite points in this story definitely had to be Timmy's innocence. It was as cute as it was endearing. Perhaps I'm a sicko, but I liked the idea of her corrupting him, in a way.

I also tip my virtual hat to you for keeping everybody in character, Wanda's disporoval standing out to me the most. It was nice to see her act true to her responsible nature, rather than approve of what many would consider a not-entirely-morally correct relationship on the spot. On alot of the other stories for this ship on this site, Vicky is also depicted as some sort of sex-crazed nymphomaniac. It was very much like a fresh breathe of air to not see this go that way.

Both of their inexperience, Timmy's ignorance and wariness towards the subject, along Vicky's advances and foward nature brewed together to create a funny, cute, sometimes embarrassing, and all around steamy story.

If you ever decide to add another chapter, I'd love to see it.!
BlindMaster chapter 6 . 5/31/2016
that good ending - I want a continuation to see how their relationship evolves, insurance will have consequences later

We then see - thanks for the fic
BlindMaster chapter 5 . 5/31/2016
crazy - her mother appeared in the best part - all excellent forms chapter
BlindMaster chapter 4 . 5/31/2016
its a freakin hot!
the temperature rises
the temperature rises
the temperature rises
BlindMaster chapter 3 . 5/31/2016
hohoh the best
birthday - love this history the best couple!
BlindMaster chapter 2 . 5/31/2016
ohoohoh a sexy bathroom ejejejeej completely distracted
BlindMaster chapter 1 . 5/31/2016
oh man very great - i read and have a potencial - my english is bad but this history is great ok i read next chapter (vickX timm )
EroCchi chapter 5 . 5/29/2016
really good story. feels like I've been seeing a whole new side of timmy and vicky with those detailed scenes, except that they're still in character which makes this story better *_* (and my fav. part of this story is timmy's innocence other than the lemons lololol)
Everclear70 chapter 6 . 5/15/2016
This was definitely a mixture of hot, sweet, and funny. I adored it.
Smiling Lemon chapter 6 . 5/6/2016
Ah this was awesome its really touching and sexy all at once. So yeah this has been a fun read!
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