Good job! Alois is a neat OC and I can't wait for her to run into the new Greed (hopefully AFTER he gets his memories back...).

:D I like how this looks so far. It looks really interesting, and it has been written pretty well. Sadly Im assuming you arent updating this story any more though, because of the publish and update date

Oh wow~ I'm really loving this story. Especially since Alois animal is a mule. ;3 I've work with them a few times and it was fun/tiring at times. So I kind of have a special spot for them.