Reviews for Cherry by KrazyK85 and JennaRay
Guest chapter 1 . 9/17
I hope you come back to this story one day.. There's so much more that awaits them... Something to think about, I know I would love to go on the adventure with them
CSG chapter 1 . 4/20
Finally got around to reading this. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing it.
SdaisyS chapter 1 . 2/25
need more. like Charlie's reaction to all this.
robertpatzlover09 chapter 1 . 6/15/2016
That was intense
jennayg123 chapter 1 . 5/1/2016
Love that not only did she know who he was, but she had been waiting for her shot with him all those years! Loved this story!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/21/2016
:-)
Glam.mam chapter 1 . 3/16/2016
Love a cheeky twist at the end cherry and lemons got together like peas an carrots x
JenRar chapter 1 . 3/12/2016
Thanks so very much for participating in our contest! :)
sunfleur chapter 1 . 3/12/2016
Hot and sweet, like a fresh slice of cherry pie
GothicTemptress chapter 1 . 3/11/2016
*fans face* Well that sure was hot, and I loved the ending, as well as how determined Bella seemed to be, even if she was playing hard to get! Can we get more of these two? Thank you for entering the CPS Contest KrazyK85 and JennaRay!
girlygirl0706 chapter 1 . 3/6/2016
Yep...this needs more chapters. Can wait to find out who wrote this.
Pa Trizia 88 chapter 1 . 3/6/2016
Damn! You make cocky PervWard so damn attractive and even adorable in his obsession. The good boy pushed into the role of the outcast. Who knows how much Chief Swan had his hands in it, sensing his lil girl's crush and the protectiveness and jealousy of a police dad breaking through, having his way in removing poor Edward from the picture. Great story, very well written! Thx for sharing and thx for adding to my dilemma in choosing only five favs...like that's realistic! Good luck ! xox
Thunnababy chapter 1 . 3/5/2016
I know the contest is over. I wasn't able to read all of the entries before the deadline but I really enjoyed your Bad Boy Edward and not so innocent Cherry Pie Bella. thank you for sharing.
mommymac0508 chapter 1 . 3/3/2016
I loved it and I really loved the twist at the end thank you
Mistydeb chapter 1 . 3/3/2016
That was hot. Bella sure did tease him for a long time, but she got him in the end. Not sure how he managed to wait for so long, especially since he had been locked up for 6 years. Poor Charlie will have a heart attack when he finds out. Debbie
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