I would like to say how deftly you have handled the relationship between Harry and Draco over these stories. It is an excellent progression growing out of the trainwreck that existed from Rowling's character interactions and you have written very realistically and plausible. Great work! well, it's overall a great work and I do so love actual story length stories and the following sequels. Thank you!

I really found Harry's Narnia obsession with how he ended up in the cupboard to be a logical explanation... it doesn't explain why the dursley's left him in the cupboard for so many years.

This was amazing. I thought the last installment in this series was quite good, but this book was a wonderful improvement on its predecessor. You built on the themes that I enjoyed in the first book and did a wonderful job directing the plot to defy expectations. I couldn't put this book down and finished it as quickly as possible and am still hungry for more. Thank you.

I literally snorted when Harry called Dobby. Can you imagine Dumbledore's face when he hears Harry has more faith in a house elf than he does in him? The Slytherins would be rejoicing.

Okaaaay! Now, I edit my previous statement! Harry might not be super smart, although he is smart to a certain degree - and very, very Slytherin. It would be wise of you to highlight that quality of his when he is in private. Good work.

On a better note from my last review, I wanted to comment on how you end your chapters - it's either with humor or mystery, sometimes with no loose ties. But either way, it's really good, keep it up.

I went through other reviewers, and I agree very much with one - a guest. It seems as though Average Harry just wants to downplay fame and not get into trouble with the Dursleys. Not at all like he's smart, quite the opposite, actually. Other than that, your series is very nice, albeit moving slowly.

Good story

I rather liked Harry being friendly with both Quirrell and Lockhart - not exactly as Dumbledore would have planned!
A first class story, Thank you.

Going to go binge the sequel now

Why would Hogwarts ever downsize their library when they can literally make more space with a wave of a wand?

Can the room of requirements make a entrance to the chamber?

Out of curiosity what exactly is the medical diagnosis that wizards give to unconscious people?

That’s a nice little way to settle the Lockheart situation

This is the first time that I’ve come across a story that has a call for help not addressed to Fawkes