Reviews for Parseltongue is Really Very Ordinary
Deepthoughts42 chapter 21 . 6/20/2021
Insert drifting meme here
Deepthoughts42 chapter 20 . 6/20/2021
Still reviewing
Deepthoughts42 chapter 19 . 6/20/2021
I thought Crouch was just a polyglot or something
Deepthoughts42 chapter 18 . 6/20/2021
Nice to see a story with an actual Will in it instead of evidence of Sirius’ innocence covered up by the ministry or Dumbledore
Deepthoughts42 chapter 16 . 6/19/2021
Almost forgot this one
Deepthoughts42 chapter 17 . 6/19/2021
If nobody is really a muggleborn and instead just descended from squibs then how was magic first brought into the human race?
Deepthoughts42 chapter 15 . 6/19/2021
Out of curiosity why did Hermione still go for Millicent’s hair? The only reason she targeted her in canon was that Hermione needed someone who wasn’t Crabbe or Goyle to impersonate and picked her because how easily she could get a hair (got in a fight during the dueling club) Wouldn’t she have just taken Harry’s place as Goyle/Crabbe so they have both replaced?
Deepthoughts42 chapter 14 . 6/19/2021
I’m guessing the French becomes important in 4th year
Deepthoughts42 chapter 13 . 6/19/2021
I saw that only 1% leave reviews so I will do my part and review every chapter from here on, prepare your inbox
Guest chapter 27 . 5/27/2021
Hi!

I'm really enjoying this series! I love how you're keeping Canon but just changing a few details and seeing where it leads! It's very satisfying!

I know it's years since you posted but I have a couple of britpicky critiques - University was free in the UK when Petunia would have been that age, so Lily going to Hogwarts shouldn't have affected that in the slightest. There was even a generous government grant (not a loan, a grant!) to cover living costs.
Equally, there is absolutely no reason for Harry not to have medical checkups - we have the NHS! Dentistry is free for under 18s, as are eye tests and cheap glasses, and of course all medical work for allergies etc. Prescriptions are also free for children.
I realise he doesn't actually have a lactose intolerance, but I think even as a child he should have found it weird that he didn't go to the doctors about this...

Also, per Canon, Hogwarts is supposed to be free, as it is the only school in Wizarding Britain, so it's their version of the local Comprehensive! Given that all labour is done by house elves and there are spells to multiply food, running costs ought to be pretty cheap too. I understand that a lot of people like to have Hogwarts as a paid-for private school for plot reasons, but I just thought I'd mention this :)

I dont have an account (I prefer to read and post on Archive of Our Own as TanzaniteWrites, you can find me there if you really want to comment!) so I know you can't reply to this, but just some things to take into consideration!

Thank you for writing!
bibliopuff chapter 27 . 4/29/2021
the more i read it, the more i like the series. you have a thing in writings. your world building is not too fast nor too slow, it's perfect. also the character developments too. you don't make them instantly change or friends, you do it slow but sure and i love it.

please pardon me, because there are so many things i would like to tell you about my opinion of this series (the good one, mind you). but unfortunately english is not my first language, so i kinda at lost of what to say, sorry. but one thing for sure, I'm definitely super interested to read the next one!
untamedmagicfire chapter 27 . 4/29/2021
I'm really, really enjoying this series :) I really love all your characterisations. I think lockhart was done really well to be able to be not as completely useless and infuriating that he usually is! I've yet to find a fic that even got close to making umbridge a decent human being so I'm very interested in your take on her if you've got that far /are planning to write her. Your Harry is a joy to read and I find myself really not knowing what is going to happen which is quite unusual and really exciting for me :)
Thank you again for your work!
bibliopuff chapter 20 . 4/29/2021
poor harry always trusting the wrong adults
bibliopuff chapter 2 . 4/28/2021
i like how harry could make a good deal with dobby without ruining the dinner here
untamedmagicfire chapter 13 . 4/28/2021
Just wanted to say thank you again for your work. I've been stuck at the hospital most of the day, waiting for my mum (she's fine thankfully but it's been a LONG day) and it has been such a relief to disappear into your world. I really needed this today and I really appreciate all the time and effort you put into your work.
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