Nice update, a little more sneaky of him to be "persuading" Filch like that. I think it's cool you've started a teen-rated community for stories; not my cup of tea but it's good.

First time I've read about the extremely outdated medical science on diseases in a HP fanfic. I'm so glad we're way past that. Humours indeed.

Loved to see you responding to my review.. :)

Though dunno why my name is coming as guest when reviewing from Fanfic reader app..

Anyway, Fair enough about Smart Harry. I generally associate it with a TMR like smart Harry, who was prodigious and close to certified genius.

Your Harry though does seem to be reaching there, lil slowly which is probably more realistic :)

Hope you include politics and court of law more in future, to show different ideas about culture, difference between light and dark ideology , stemming from genuine cultural differences for majority and Harry's conflict about each side :)

Thank you once again for a engaging chapter, I am looking forward greatly to your next. The level of romance you are proposing is fine with me as it seems some stories are not written to the age of the characters in mind. And I do see this Harry as being in some ways 'smarter', but mostly he is just not living down to Ron's level as Ron here is not his role model, thankfully.

I have to say, I really enjoyed how you portrayed wizard medicine, and how it hasn't changed. I don't really mind about the relationships, but do enjoy where the story is going. I do have to wonder if Voldemort really got the Philosopher's Stone, or what he will do with it. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Germs imaginary creatures. Lol. Awaiting more.

It's so nice he's interested in healing

Hi.

Hermione and her ambitions. Ron and his family "blood traitorism", that's just wishes, not tradition, such a silly explanation :)

I think that a conversation with Pomphrey is very very important for the story and worldbuilding. You wrote how wizards think, that the magic can solve anything, and usually can, but they don't try to understand how, but just follow some old theories, without proof is they are true or false. The muggles have to strugle with everything so they are more creative, and they developed their own elites, not are only followers for wizards in disguise, how it had been. I think that for wizards real problems are when magic at easy cannot solve problems, and when they have to be creative, that's their problem lack of creativity.

A nice idea with Filch. I wonder why similar things are so rarely seen in fanfics. that's the first time I see a student who brings down Filch. He is a squib, they can just stupefy him and later oblivate. I personaly have an idea for Filch for one story. That one 7th year student, drunk, after some terrible battle (total AU), is wandering at night in Hogwarts with a bottle, and Filch comes, so our "hero" just imperiused Filch and ordered him to jum from the tallest tower...

I like an idea of your comunity. I think I know one story which suits.

Interesting story and premise.. :)
Love the story where the believers on both sides are not wrong but just diff beliefs and cultural thing.

Kudos for that.

Though ur smart Harry who tries to be average, seems more average Harry just trying to be average. No offence but he does not seem smart, someone who has talent for magic and is prodigious at it or something.

S
omeone like TMR during Hogwarts days, just trying to hide his skills and magic and such.

Would be interesting to see the pairings in future :)

Just 1 suggestion- make story a lil bit faster pace if you can.

I just finished reading all the perfectly normal series. Great storyline. I like the touch of making pansy family. Very original. I also like how you made harry not like the magical world in a a very realistic manner and how you portrayed the dursleys. Great work. Very original. Love it. Keep up the good work.

What to write?

Lockhart is just himself. Although I enjoy how you write their conversation about fame and glory, and how you menage with it.

Hermione, quiditch, Colin. They are how they are supposed to be.

What Harry mean about "the missing oportunity" after learning about Sally-Ann? So that's a way how you solved her mystery.

It's sad that Harry has to do so much, because Dudley, and his own belief. I wonder when he finally broke chains and embrace his magical heritage. Even Hermione is going to be the best witch she can be.

Awaiting more.

It's sounds like good advice Lockhart gave Harry

I'm French, and there was no error in these sentences. The "parlez-vous français?" may sound a bit too formal for a friend, but that's okay, since Hermione is learning it and even some French people can't speak it or write it without error (the horrors I've seen...)

I just have to say you're one of my favorite authors to read. You're very considerate to your readers and you take criticism graciously; in all honesty, I wish I could be more like you :)

As for your stories, I love them all. This series in particular is very interesting, and I love how it slowly breaks away from canon. Although I've never been partial to Lordship plots and the like, you've got an interesting spin on it, and it's not all you have to write about. I also like how your writing style is very similar to J.K.'s, which keeps with the Harry Potter spirit of things. And I honestly like how you have Hermione characterized-the Muggleborn activist for all unfairness, which is actually canon, and I didn't find her irritating in the least.

And although this may be premature, I'm excited for third year (PoA was my favorite, after all). Just saying :)

Eagerly awaiting your next chapter,
wtD