I haven't finished the chapter yet but i had to review, You really have a way with words that tortures your readers. I love what you put about the bow " the bow works every time..." I LOVE IT! I can't imagine where you find all the time to write this stuff. it would take me like a year to write just one chapter. Just out of curiosity, do you read tamora pierce? i love her stuff. thanks so much for taking the time to write this, Namamie

I haven't finished the chapter yet but i had to review, You really have a way with words that tortures your readers. I love what you put about the bow " the bow works every time..." I LOVE IT! I can't imagine where you find all the time to write this stuff. it would take me like a year to write just one chapter. Just out of curiosity, do you read tamora pierce? i love her stuff. thanks so much for taking the time to write this, Namamie

brilliant fic! I kept reading, and reading, and reading... got the jist of it? :p I will definitely read the next story, as soon as i can!

Hee hee hee. . . . The *look*. . . .

Nice story, but "dúnadan" is supposed to be capitalized. It says so in the books, so don't look at me like that.

Yeah. . . . Nice, but "cannot" is one word.

Great story. Well, written. Onward to the sequel

This is truly an awesome fic! You did such a great job on this; its a work of art, believe me! Tortured!Aragorn had me completely enthralled, and the twins were great; they reminded me so much of Fred and George from Harry Potter. Which is good! Anyway, you did a spectacular job on this, and if I could find any other way to compliment you, I would.

So, kudos!

Great story, you're an excellent writer. I'm looking forward to the sequel which I will start reading in about 2 minutes. Just wanted to say that I really enjoy your writing and I also wanted to ask if you ever considered writing the back story to the whole spider incident. Something tells me that would be funny. Keep up the good work. :)

hmm... interesting... I think I'll keep on reading this story... :)

Okay if English is truely your second language, then you put me to shame. Cause English is my first, and only, and I can't even get that perfect. Cripes

What a marvellous ending to the story. it was truly beautiful. I could almost hear Legolas's voice, full of love and devotion.

On to your next story...

Wow, your reader responses are almost as long as your story. Great chapter. I would normally be depressed right now, knowing that this is the second to last chapter, but there is a sequel of sorts, so I can rest assured that I will not be in Nili withdrawl for very long. Lily

Yeah! The bastard is dead. Not one of the two bastards that I would most like to see dead, but that was a hot sword he was carrying. On to the next chapter!

Ah! I hope Legolas guts the humans. I'm sure it would make just as good a bowstring as any sheep guts. Much more satisfying too!