interesting set-up... let's see where you go with this story

Oh I LOVE this!

Oops I forgot there was one more chapter to go. I agree, they died FARR too easily.

AWWWW I was SOOOOO hoping for torture. They deserved pain, They deserved to die, broken in body, spirit and mind. Ugh. Oh well. On to the next of your stories!

Oh oh oh oh my GOD I am so excited to see them all die! As evil as that may be.. Oh please torture them first, please, please please... Please?

oh my God kill them! Kilil them all already!

Oh I am soooo excited to see elrond kill them all. He IS going to kill them all... Right? Right? ... right? there might even be elrond using his elven ring, though I doubt it. The only thing I can think of him using his ring for is against sauron

Oh for the love of God girl, let him go and kick some ass!

Thank you for creating such an impeccably beautiful story

I know he had to die, but I"m still sorry he did.

That story is very well written and very real. It also makes me feel very human... Wanting to punish the crazy, evil, sadistic people. Not kill, death penalty and such should be a last measure if it is the only way to protect those they would hurt, but cruel and unusual punishment, like cleaning between the toes of mountain trolls, brushing the teeth of orcs, and looking after the dear sweet arachnid. And possibly being glared at by a rotation of elves for all eternity.
Really well written and very interesting.
-Dyslexic Nerd

awww! It amazing

The story like a whole was an excellent one. I loved every piece of your humour and without it the story would have been too...I don't know what word to choose. Dry?
This last chapter was amazing. I write too, for many years ago (more than 20), but I was not yet capable to end something. So, this is another "Bravo" for you. Another one, I read your story in two days, despite the fact that my head allmost started to spin at late hours, much like poor Estel's head after his seven or eight's blow...
Did I tell you that I enjoyed very much, the whole story? And you must definetely keep writing!

" Hiding in a tree like highwaymen waiting for our own father to appear in an attempt to save our little brother from a crazy elf lord with a vendetta against said father? What do you mean, 'not normal"
Ok, this one was too good. I allmost started laughing, and I am at work! Maybe I should stop reading for now...But I can't, I want to see what your brilliant mind make up with!

Allright, let's start with the beginning. I started to read your storu yesterday. I enjoyed every chapter, especially the parts with Thranduil tell Legolas to thank Elrond for allowing His house distroyed, or Legolas "things coul get worse. Later: see? That is worse", and all that. For your first fic, you did an excellent job so far. And the torture was realistic enough...I feel sorry for poor Estel, but I am also proud, because he resisted not to cry.
And, I allmost forgot, I really enjoy your comments from the beginning of the chapters...So, how is Antarctica? Or, it was Alaska?
I saw some german words, I think. I'm from Europe too, Romania. So...Danke schon, for a wonderfull story! I can't wait to see what Elrond will do to that C-guy! And, I hope Nolad will help Estel. I like Nolad so far.