This was quite different. And very interesting. I liked how mature your characters were. And how Edward dealt with the whole falling in love with another person thing. It was true. And he was not hurtful or anything. I really liked this. Thanks for sharing

So Good! Thanks for giving us an insight into Tanya's life

Loved!

From start to finish I loved this story!

Thank you for sharing your words with us Xx

Bella is amazing! I loved the way she defended herself and Edward ... and she did it with dignity... She also gave Tanya a lot to think about!

Great chapter X

Nasty... Just plain tasteless and Nasty!

Poor Bella.. I Loved how Edward defended her and she in turn tried to defend them too!

Oh .. Just so much love for this story!

This chapter was perfect

LOVED !

I love this Edward .. he is truthful without being cruel ... I love that he is such a sweet man!

Carlisle's words were true .. Everyone of them he spoke of to Edward .. and that is what he needed ..

LOVED X

The difference between Bella and Tanya, besides their ages is that Bella is genuinely sweet and considers other peoples feelings and emotions! Tanya's main priority has been her magazine and that is it ..

I loved the sweet kiss and the passionate one at the end of this chapter!

LOVED

Oh My Fucking God!

Tanya is evil .. and whilst you can understand her hurt about her marriage ending ... she has no one to blame but herself .. Vile Vile lady!

Ooh he told her .. well he actually showed her, her mark .. the way you wrote this chapter was beautiful ... it was so loving and filled with some sorrow too!

YES !

Edward finally has Bella's tattoo ... *squeals*

I loved that Bella let him know why she loves what she does .. Bella's excitement about her work was written perfectly ..!

I wonder if Edward knows that it was Bella that planed everything for him and Tanya ?

That sure is a heartbreaking thing for her to have to do :( .. it was sweet that he brought her a gift though, and that he is constantly thinking of her .. ;)

Ooh that sweet silly man :( ..

I wonder how long it will be until Edward notices he has Bella's tattoo? ... Though he wouldn't really know it was hers at first would he? I don't think he has seen it and Bella had her altered too!

Ooh Bella's torment and heartache at the end of this chapter just gutted me :( ..

What an incredibly sad chapter :( .. it started out with Bella being so happy and enjoying her night with Edward and then Embry spotted Edward's mark on her back :( ..