Ed she's gonna have nightmares for quite some times about this ! call Dipper?

some manataurs are gonna be in deep...

This was a nice read. It brings out the side of Wendy's character that I would of liked to see more of in the show. I can also see something like this happening so thats pretty cool.

well done very interesting

ohhhhh
nice one bro
i was nice seeing major emotion come out of wendy so yay

Woah, man. I... woah. That got very deep. I really feel bad for Wendy. Not having a mom for most of your life... then finding out how she died... that some hard stuff. Wow

Woah, harsh. Damn, I feel bad for Wendy

This was so heartbreaking. And well-written. Great job.

Oh wow, I was not expecting this at all. I didn't even read the genres and thought it was going to be a memory of her meeting Dipper from the future, or something along those lines. This is a good twist.

Wow, this is, this is good. It's dark and incredibly sad. The detail of her trying to pull it loose when she realizes that she doesn't want the memory anymore is powerful. Wendy's reaction after seeing the memory shows her grief so well.

It's so tragic, but well written, and highly emotional. Great story.

This is SO GOOD!
It's written really well, and it really makes you feel for Wendy.
I love the concept too, it's something I've thought about a bit, but you wrote it amazingly.

Wow...

Good stuff. Grim stuff.